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safe eyes
Filtered jade
lime spectrums
crushing eyes
surprises inside
green tunnels
emerald waterfalls
where my heart crawls
a child of attraction
her eyes are safe
so i never look back...
lime spectrums
crushing eyes
surprises inside
green tunnels
emerald waterfalls
where my heart crawls
a child of attraction
her eyes are safe
so i never look back...
Published 6th Oct 2012
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6th Oct 2012 7:39pm
Though beautifully written, I'm not sure I understand. I'm sure the fault is with my badly used brain LOL
6th Oct 2012 10:27pm
As a girl with green eyes, I absolutely love this. Welcome to DUP, glad to see you came with substantial skill.
AlwaysCaliban
AlwaysCaliban
11th Oct 2012 6:47pm
I also have green eyes, and it makes me think of nine and my sister's. I love green eyes. And so, in turn, I love this poem. Write some more, hahaha. ;)
Your eyes are not green, they're hazel, with a little copper fleck. haha
11th Oct 2012 11:15pm
There is just something about green eyes. Love the imagery and keep at it. Great write
12th Oct 2012 00:09am
Beautiful, dangerous but safe at the same time.
I get the feelings of both that tie a knot in me.
Clio
I get the feelings of both that tie a knot in me.
Clio
