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m a r r i a g e
we
hurtle
like
tropical toads
limbs stretched
soma weightless
alive in
nonbeing
bounteous
ambiguous
like
human shaped kites
we rush towards
a tangible freedom
near far
revolve evolve
into
ancient impressions
in frozen space time
we are but
overlapping notes
of a movement
of pristine silence
that is a blast of
a million childish giggles
a billion doves
cooing scattering
we begin to
find each other
anew
again
and
again
till the atoms
vibrate
coalesce
as
nothingreallyseparates
in space
you see
we are
one
the hum of om
the hiss of
the coiled serpent
since
the
start
[re-issued]
Published 4th Oct 2012
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13th Dec 2012 3:21pm
This poem was multicolored.
The part about childish giggles made my mouth tug to the top.
To be frank, this poem is frightening. The idea of becoming one with another. Emotion can be so tremendously impacted by those we love. For someone to have such control over me is a bloodcurdling aspect.
Which leaves the question, is the marriage beneficial?
I guess it depends on the person. Everyone should experience true love.
The part about childish giggles made my mouth tug to the top.
To be frank, this poem is frightening. The idea of becoming one with another. Emotion can be so tremendously impacted by those we love. For someone to have such control over me is a bloodcurdling aspect.
Which leaves the question, is the marriage beneficial?
I guess it depends on the person. Everyone should experience true love.
13th Dec 2012 4:20pm
sublime
well, you have said it all. honestly
i was not even traversing within a radius
of a few light years 'round the traditional
concept of 'marriage'. it's rather the union
of two soulmates. 'gandharva vivaha' of hinduism
would be favoured than the traditional institution
of marriage in this case.
that answers your question. more of less.:]
yes, i can understand frightening. if you found
it so, you read and felt it right. yes and yes.
yes, true love 'is' experienced by everyone. in
different forms.
happy days,
sumeet
well, you have said it all. honestly
i was not even traversing within a radius
of a few light years 'round the traditional
concept of 'marriage'. it's rather the union
of two soulmates. 'gandharva vivaha' of hinduism
would be favoured than the traditional institution
of marriage in this case.
that answers your question. more of less.:]
yes, i can understand frightening. if you found
it so, you read and felt it right. yes and yes.
yes, true love 'is' experienced by everyone. in
different forms.
happy days,
sumeet
14th Dec 2012 2:22am
Ah ha :)
It's perfect. The joining of two soulmates rather than marriage...I couldn't find the words.
Marriage sounds far too conventional for such a...thing.
True love is broad. The thin line that joins us to our second half is not. One thing we all must learn :)
It's perfect. The joining of two soulmates rather than marriage...I couldn't find the words.
Marriage sounds far too conventional for such a...thing.
True love is broad. The thin line that joins us to our second half is not. One thing we all must learn :)
14th Dec 2012 4:12pm
yes. that's better.
anything created by the elders,
by the wise, by the old timers,
anything by them will crumble
in the end. this, won't. never.
yes, one will learn. once.
x
anything created by the elders,
by the wise, by the old timers,
anything by them will crumble
in the end. this, won't. never.
yes, one will learn. once.
x
