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YOU
I used to think you took my breath away,
but i realised i was suffercating in your
BULLSHIT
but i realised i was suffercating in your
BULLSHIT
Published 26th Sep 2012
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26th Sep 2012 8:31am
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26th Sep 2012 5:10pm
This is great! A handful of words paint a portrait that can be a mirror for the one it was written for, and many others, or the likeness of someone everyone has met, someone full of shit! Brilliant and compact, I wish I had written this one! But if I had, it would never have been this compact, lol. jj
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