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Roland
When I close my eyes and dream
My sleep is filled with innocent screams.
Waking up I feel incomplete
So I grab my favorite hatchet and hit the street.
I prowl the dark alley ways late at night
Looking for a whore, to satisfy
my never ending appetite.
My blade tucked well in my jacket
when I find that special girl
love i will give to her passionately with my hatchet.
Once you are in pieces and in a bloody pile
I will trot away with a devious smile.
They will find you in the morning with
Cuts so clean they will claim the work of a saber.
For all you know I may be your neighbor.
By:Ralcore86
My sleep is filled with innocent screams.
Waking up I feel incomplete
So I grab my favorite hatchet and hit the street.
I prowl the dark alley ways late at night
Looking for a whore, to satisfy
my never ending appetite.
My blade tucked well in my jacket
when I find that special girl
love i will give to her passionately with my hatchet.
Once you are in pieces and in a bloody pile
I will trot away with a devious smile.
They will find you in the morning with
Cuts so clean they will claim the work of a saber.
For all you know I may be your neighbor.
By:Ralcore86
Published 19th Sep 2012
| Edited 23rd Sep 2012
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19th Sep 2012 8:57am
Disturbing piece, cleverly written. I noticed one typo; surely the 4th line from the end should read "will trot away" not "while".
The combination of the jaunty rhyme with the grisly subject matter is effective.
The combination of the jaunty rhyme with the grisly subject matter is effective.
19th Sep 2012 4:26pm
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