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Idk
3 times I've tried
Look who's done
And here I cry
U stab
Once
Twice
3rds across my arm
Bleeding out
My crimson charm
Drip. Drop. Here I lie.
This world is cold.
Dead is how I'll grow old.
Look who's done
And here I cry
U stab
Once
Twice
3rds across my arm
Bleeding out
My crimson charm
Drip. Drop. Here I lie.
This world is cold.
Dead is how I'll grow old.
Published 19th Sep 2012
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20th Sep 2012 6:46am
Very potently effective. "My crimson charm" is truly poetic as is the final line. I read this a few times - it is that powerful, and sad.
