Be yourself

Ok, Gigi. I'd suggest leaving out the caps at the beginning of each line. I like the form you used and your message.

Ok will do. Thanks :)

Hey Gi

I quite like this piece and Mr. A (*looks up) was quite right, it reads much better without those caps.

But Im feeling something about this line puts the whole read into a confusion.

" the bruises the scars is that who you wanna be"

I thought maybe...
   "the bruises the scars
is that who you wanna be"

or even dare I say free it up a little?

" the bruises
    the scars
is that who you wanna be?"

All just opinion, because I like the message, the write is tight and the verse is real. The structure has a unique quality that works well with the over all piece.

Kudos from me.

;]

Hmmm I'm liking the question mark. And I'm having a hard time with putting the words where I want them on my phone. It looks one way! Then when I hit submit its not how I want it. But thanks for the help :*)

Enjoyed babe... Nothing wrong with being yourself!!!!

Thank you love

always be yourself, but don't convince yourself that being you is being a victim.

Love the positive vibe coming through in this piece, heavy subject given a light and well written touch.

Thanks for the read.

And thank you for the beautiful comment xoxox

I love the poem, but I also like how you were given constructive criticism without bashing your work.

This piece should be posted everywhere, because the message is clear.

Way to go!!!!!

Awe thank you kym. Can't wait for our oysters and margaritas :-)

I really like this poem. Such a power message in few words. Regardless of what you try, you can only really be yourself. well done.

Thanks ref :-)

This is great with a great message. I love your structure. I try things like that sometimes and always just end up backspacing all the lines back to the front. Clearly it works here though. Great job!

Thank you sis :-)

Indeed, no one is better at being me than me :)

Very nice piece Gigi

Thank you ken

Being yourself is sometimes hard when you want to be like everyone else.  I like this piece because it gives a positive resolution and not necessarily a negative one.  Well done, GiGi;)

Thanks my friend :-)

it's hard to be myself but you have always accepted me and for that I love you Gg..great message..xoxoxo Crim

You're the best that's why xoxox

Oh Gigi. I see myself in this poem. Tears fall from my eyes, heart and soul. I struggle with this everyday that I draw a breath.

Don't let it get you. Stand strong! Hope you feel better! Don't let anyone make you feel like you're not worthy of being yourself! Trust me you're xooxox