My dog fucks HiS daughter too..

I love dogs. I had two dogs once, he was neutered and the other one, a bitch, wasn't.

Well the commentor above distracted me from my thoughts...basically wanted to say that there are crazy fucked up people in the world and you seem to capture them well...

Dark, disturbing, and most definitely a necessary poem in this catagory.  As for what Wardlow stated, there are plenty of fucked up people, some more fucked up than others but it doesn't surprise me.  Not only do you allow the reader's interpretation to run wild, you challenge the concept to pushing the boundries as you've done so here.  Great job!

This may have been inspired by events experienced by you but the connections involved point to the larger society as well.

Possibly a typo, "trying to stretch
a quater.."
Maybe you meant "quarter"

Yes sir thank you . I shall fix it right now. I appreciate the critique and thank you for your comment. yes this definitely touches on much larger society as well.

Odd thought process, "My dad fucks me, but my dog fucks his daughter too." You can kinda understand her backstory in such a line. I mean obviously she is getting desynsitized by the act, and is trying to rationalize it anyway she can. Good write, and yet somehow I'm back again.

Thank you so much for your analysis on my work here. It's so intriguing to hear ones view. this one actually was probably the closest one to the truth so far. it is actually a client of mine that pays me to pretend i'm his daughter and even after all this time it sickens me. and i breed pit bulls and at one point saw the male tryin to fuck all his daughters  which is i guess natural in the animal world. so it just hit me that even if i threw him outside i couldnt depend on my dog to eat someone over something he does himself. so i'll get drunk again and bury it. wow i cant believe i just shared all this. lol. i need a drink. and this is the first for me EVER! to indulge on a comment .. thank you for reading me.

People find me easy to talk to I guess. :) Besides, I don't judge. Client huh, people gotta eat right, and bills have to be paid for. Don't worry though because I gotta believe that you're a good person. Don't forget that you are okay, and this is from an almost stranger, and I'm not even Christian :D

your poems always give me a dark knowing smile across my face