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Evening in front of a computer
The day is done and yet it lingers
On the eve of this sultry evening
The wind passes on the house’s eaves
Encourages poets fertile imagining
As the bells of the churches ring
An old love song begin its whispers
The lyrics in the hearts began to sing
And urge the pen to write the verses
Thus I write these stanzas true
To forge the words within this heart
To tell the story long overdue
Of love repudiated and extinguished light
I will begin to tell this tale
Soon on square pads, my elegant quill
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24th Jul 2012 12:51pm
Re: Evening in front of a computer
24th Jul 2012 1:31pm
A touching tale I can hear being recited in pubs of olde. Wonderful piece.
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re: Re: Evening in front of a computer
24th Jul 2012 2:41pm
Hi there, thanks! actually this is true, during a writers block. No inspiration, just sitting there and mulling...
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24th Jul 2012 2:13pm
re: Re: Evening in front of a computer
24th Jul 2012 2:41pm
Re: Evening in front of a computer
Anonymous
24th Jul 2012 2:42pm
Nice, been there, done that Grace!
Strider :)
Strider :)
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re: Re: Evening in front of a computer
24th Jul 2012 2:43pm
I know Strider, sit there and think I will write something awe inspiring tomorrow...and nothing comes. Sad eh.
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24th Jul 2012 3:01pm
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24th Jul 2012 3:06pm
Oh Gypsy Red, sometimes inspiration just comes and at times its like constipation...you know its there, but it wont come out! Sorry that was crude...but still...
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24th Jul 2012 5:11pm
hahahaha love it!! yes maam the truth can be crude but it is still truth lolol your comparisons are right on the money!! lolol
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24th Jul 2012 5:15pm
Re: Evening in front of a computer
Anonymous
24th Jul 2012 3:02pm
Just lovely...I can see you sitting there, looking out, searching.....
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re: Re: Evening in front of a computer
24th Jul 2012 3:08pm
And most probably scratching my head, grimacing at the showers of dandruff...Kitty, thanks for being kind...