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American Vandalism
My American Graffiti
lacked a soph hop
a burger shack
shiny cars
or sense of belonging
ninety sixish,
I'm thinking Wu Tang and dust blunts
psych wards runaways and outcasts.
Hadn't yet discovered art
and the closest to communion
we felt
was when Ms.Molly
good golly'd us up on
electric tribal chant
"down the way"
was our rite of passage
until beat up and robbed
we became nearly adult initiated
into family values
and at last
got high with the elders
no quarterbacks
cliques, malls or "in crowds"
and no one's sold on normal no how
but
meaning and morality
could have at least left
a call back number.
lacked a soph hop
a burger shack
shiny cars
or sense of belonging
ninety sixish,
I'm thinking Wu Tang and dust blunts
psych wards runaways and outcasts.
Hadn't yet discovered art
and the closest to communion
we felt
was when Ms.Molly
good golly'd us up on
electric tribal chant
"down the way"
was our rite of passage
until beat up and robbed
we became nearly adult initiated
into family values
and at last
got high with the elders
no quarterbacks
cliques, malls or "in crowds"
and no one's sold on normal no how
but
meaning and morality
could have at least left
a call back number.
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Re: American Vandalism
Anonymous
8th Jul 2012 8:10am
I always say (to anyone who's listenning) I was born in the wrong era!
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re: Re: American Vandalism
8th Jul 2012 11:22am
I hear ya devlin (which era was yours I wonder?). Though I truly hate nostalgia and the sense of oh it was better in my day...i grew up in the ninetys and guess suited me well, and shit at least it wasnt the eightys
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8th Jul 2012 7:40pm
Hallelujah to everything you said above. I would have loved to been a teen in the seventies. So much amazing music in that decade.
Anywho, great write here again, LB. I loved the sense of moving on from something and not giving much of a shit ... until the end. Good stuff. Thank you for being on my Reading List.
Anywho, great write here again, LB. I loved the sense of moving on from something and not giving much of a shit ... until the end. Good stuff. Thank you for being on my Reading List.
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8th Jul 2012 8:15pm
My mellow my man..the reading list appreciation certainly is mutual I assure you..my ma dukes was seventies child so I grew up with that music you speak of (she tells me that as a baby Supertramp was my favorite to go sleepytime to)
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Anonymous
11th Jul 2012 3:55am
Hey, I grew up in the 80's. . .but damn would I have given anything to grow up in the 50's and 60's. . .maybe because Johnny Depp made it look so good. And I would have definitely looked like Tracy Lords (but without the porn-queen Tierra!)
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Re: American Vandalism
8th Jul 2012 9:00am
re: Re: American Vandalism
8th Jul 2012 11:25am
Curious on that sigh..relatable sigh? Sympathetic.or pity sigh?...either way happy it garnered not only a like, but a like button.booyah
re: re: Re: American Vandalism
8th Jul 2012 11:42am
sorry... i was extremely sparse with my words this morning... was feeling everything through sounds instead.
and, hm. that was more of a "i-totally-get-it" sigh. understanding more than relating, i think though.
(sorry for that vaccuum of a comment! positive i owe you a proper one now.) [punctuation smiley implied]
and, hm. that was more of a "i-totally-get-it" sigh. understanding more than relating, i think though.
(sorry for that vaccuum of a comment! positive i owe you a proper one now.) [punctuation smiley implied]
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8th Jul 2012 12:20pm
Thanks much on clarifying...i didnt mean this to be so bleak, I was watching movie(not even american graffiti) that had that wholesome together feel(even the badass s in them films are tame an adorable), my high school years nothing like that... Though life for me didnt start til after that. Hated being kid, young adult perfect,but not kid
Generation F'd
11th Jul 2012 3:21am
And he can do social commentary? Speak on the faux-angst of the slackers and sort of dig on an entire era for the journey?
Me. Thinks. So. YEAH! Fuck the man!
I mean, like, that was in a previous generation. I think this generation is more like... pass the bowl and find the fucking remote already.
Really good.
Me. Thinks. So. YEAH! Fuck the man!
I mean, like, that was in a previous generation. I think this generation is more like... pass the bowl and find the fucking remote already.
Really good.
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re: Generation F'd
11th Jul 2012 3:57am
Dig it..thanks for the comment... Think I wanna go back into this,feels like I could go further