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why i love dslrs
she
loves photography
outdoor wildlife
and children
has a nikon
never told me
which model
women
ha
hates her accent
thinks its way more
than should probably be
hides it most of the times
tries rather
it makes her dazzle
like a diamond in stasis
and layers of dust
dreams of the ocean
lying face down
smiling safe free
while the seven lovers
come one by one
caress her feet
lives in her oneiric realm
that she does
all the time
an island somewhere
in the pacific
a small cottage with
whalen rexroth poe
stacks of journals
psychology analogy
and this and that
yes she is a romantic
yet hides it knowing
that she aint great
thats the fun part
she has eyes that
make me want to cry
cheeks that remind me
of things long forgotten
like beauty
i would love to elope
with her to havana
have a small store
photograph document
travel
and discover ourselves
in the nooks and folds
of the heart soul
body
she is all mystery
grows and then
ceases to be like
some undiscovered
sea algae
i love it hate it
bares it all
poems that is
misses her family
and chunks from life
otherwise she is a
disneyland dream
makes me want to
open myself up
thanksgiving turkey
i think she likes me
how sad is that really
for.her
Published 2nd Jul 2012
| Edited 3rd Jul 2012
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3rd Jul 2012 00:39am
"it makes her dazzle
like a diamond in stasis
and layers of dust
dreams of the ocean
lying face down
smiling safe free
while the seven lovers
come one by one
caress her feet"
speechless...
the images that you portray in ALL your poems are beyond enviable..
like a diamond in stasis
and layers of dust
dreams of the ocean
lying face down
smiling safe free
while the seven lovers
come one by one
caress her feet"
speechless...
the images that you portray in ALL your poems are beyond enviable..
3rd Jul 2012 1:06am
DarcAngeL
Wow. A pleasure to have you around
in this part of DUP. Has been a while,
I can tell:)
Well thank you. I am glad they have
had the effect. And you are kind as
always.
Happy you stopped by.
Warm regards,
Sumeet
Wow. A pleasure to have you around
in this part of DUP. Has been a while,
I can tell:)
Well thank you. I am glad they have
had the effect. And you are kind as
always.
Happy you stopped by.
Warm regards,
Sumeet
Anonymous
3rd Jul 2012 00:43am
Well, that woman has Good Taste...I have a Nikon as well.
Your way with words Sumeet just astounds me :)
"she has eyes that
make me want to cry
cheeks that remind me
of things long forgotten"
I love this part ;)
Your way with words Sumeet just astounds me :)
"she has eyes that
make me want to cry
cheeks that remind me
of things long forgotten"
I love this part ;)
milkyway
Yes, she does.:)In most of the things.
I am glad that these leftovers do the work
for you. Lazy as I can be, it is a wonder.
Nevertheless I am happy as always.
Much love,
Sumeet
Yes, she does.:)In most of the things.
I am glad that these leftovers do the work
for you. Lazy as I can be, it is a wonder.
Nevertheless I am happy as always.
Much love,
Sumeet
3rd Jul 2012 3:01am
Sumeet my friend,read this earlier,you ve made edits no? Much easier go this run...mystery typo by the way...takes a few times to catch your cadence, but a real joy when its caught. Such a hopefull romantic, admirable. How sad is that even sounds not so dismal from you. A lost love is at least a found write(kinda like that line,ha). Always a pleasure
3rd Jul 2012 3:12am
baron
my good man.:) yeah, a bit here and there. am glad you found the flow better. thanks for the heads up by the way on the typo.
well that is a happy moment there. ahoy.
being caught is the best thing, i say.
and yes, well that makes us two.
ain't that true now? books and art and
cacti and crowley notwithstanding, that's
the bare deep seated truth.
not dismal is a good thing. a thin ice there
though. and then, all is not lost, brother.
cycle. circle. sisyphus. on and on. search.
thank you for stopping by. always make me smile.
much love and respect,
sumeet
p.s- i like that line as well. :)use it.
my good man.:) yeah, a bit here and there. am glad you found the flow better. thanks for the heads up by the way on the typo.
well that is a happy moment there. ahoy.
being caught is the best thing, i say.
and yes, well that makes us two.
ain't that true now? books and art and
cacti and crowley notwithstanding, that's
the bare deep seated truth.
not dismal is a good thing. a thin ice there
though. and then, all is not lost, brother.
cycle. circle. sisyphus. on and on. search.
thank you for stopping by. always make me smile.
much love and respect,
sumeet
p.s- i like that line as well. :)use it.
3rd Jul 2012 1:47pm
Have to ask why dslrs? Been sitting w me,ha. Wonder if an encryption, to protect identity? (i had done that w "hales", in that if I put real name,she would be less than thrilled)... Or I just dont get it
3rd Jul 2012 1:53pm
rare is the occasion when a crypt is placed in front of you, the one of hoofs and haleS..and you miss it. indeed my friend, indeed. the former is true. or may be it's just the breeze past a storm. both way its fine. :)
p.s- nikon it is.:]
p.s- nikon it is.:]
Anonymous
3rd Jul 2012 5:57am
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3rd Jul 2012 6:09am
Christ[ian]
For christ's sake. :]
I was sure you will have a fun time reading this.
And see, you did. Thanks for stopping by mate.
Good man.
Happy days,
Sumeet
For christ's sake. :]
I was sure you will have a fun time reading this.
And see, you did. Thanks for stopping by mate.
Good man.
Happy days,
Sumeet
3rd Jul 2012 9:04am
3rd Jul 2012 9:27am
Fred
Good man. Thanks for heading this way.
Construtive or not, connection is imperative.
Glad you had those moments. Aww. [Cute? Ha ha.]
Hope to see again.
Happy writing
x
Sumeet
Good man. Thanks for heading this way.
Construtive or not, connection is imperative.
Glad you had those moments. Aww. [Cute? Ha ha.]
Hope to see again.
Happy writing
x
Sumeet
5th Jul 2012 8:46am
These lines:
i would love to elope
with her to havana
have a small store
photograph document
travel
and discover ourselves
in the nooks and folds
of the heart soul
Spoke to me specifically. The thought of getting away to focus in isolation is a grand one and one that drips with romance in company.
DSLRs = Digital Single Lens Reflex. A very adaptable and user-friendly camera. Much of the movie 'The Black Swan' was shot on a DSLR. What can be done with tech these days!
i would love to elope
with her to havana
have a small store
photograph document
travel
and discover ourselves
in the nooks and folds
of the heart soul
Spoke to me specifically. The thought of getting away to focus in isolation is a grand one and one that drips with romance in company.
DSLRs = Digital Single Lens Reflex. A very adaptable and user-friendly camera. Much of the movie 'The Black Swan' was shot on a DSLR. What can be done with tech these days!
5th Jul 2012 9:00am
Hey PTM
so good to see you:) yup I know what you
mean by romance in isolation.Indian women
are always skeeered. so I will go american.
that's the plan. and eloping is great.:]
i had four of those. nasty ones. nikon d 90,
canon 7d ,5d mk ii and i ds. lost the four
of those with 2 hard disks [1 tb] in ladakh.
they are great cameras and one if the finest
additions in a while. i have shot with Red
One [ad production] in the past and these
are great. i did not know about Black Swan.
which one was it, arri alexa? lot of the
movies in the last 3 years have been shot
with these. its very cheap though puritans
prefer film. damn. i have said too much
[losing my religion]
thanks for stopping by sir.
sumeet
so good to see you:) yup I know what you
mean by romance in isolation.Indian women
are always skeeered. so I will go american.
that's the plan. and eloping is great.:]
i had four of those. nasty ones. nikon d 90,
canon 7d ,5d mk ii and i ds. lost the four
of those with 2 hard disks [1 tb] in ladakh.
they are great cameras and one if the finest
additions in a while. i have shot with Red
One [ad production] in the past and these
are great. i did not know about Black Swan.
which one was it, arri alexa? lot of the
movies in the last 3 years have been shot
with these. its very cheap though puritans
prefer film. damn. i have said too much
[losing my religion]
thanks for stopping by sir.
sumeet
Anonymous
- Edited 12th Aug 2012 5:10am
6th Jul 2012 2:22am
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6th Jul 2012 3:18am
aish
:) thank you. tangible is the head and the heart
and the castles that float. tranquil is the rest.
i was hoping for entranced. enchanting has almost
become a norm now.
much love,
sumeet
:) thank you. tangible is the head and the heart
and the castles that float. tranquil is the rest.
i was hoping for entranced. enchanting has almost
become a norm now.
much love,
sumeet
Anonymous
- Edited 12th Aug 2012 5:12am
8th Jul 2012 9:16am
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11th Jul 2012 3:52am
Another one out of the ballpark.
Holy shit-damn. This told the story. THE story. The run-away and life that fantasy life RIGHT NOW story, and live it out, and love it... and hurt with it, and fade in it beautifully, and wants it all the more.
You're a deep weirdo, that's freaking awesome.
Holy shit-damn. This told the story. THE story. The run-away and life that fantasy life RIGHT NOW story, and live it out, and love it... and hurt with it, and fade in it beautifully, and wants it all the more.
You're a deep weirdo, that's freaking awesome.
11th Jul 2012 6:25am
hey betty
damn. you amaze me with your level of everything.
commitment to start with. so much to learn.:]
ah, i knew you would smile reading this. the story
is one you know at different levels. yes yes yes.
all the more, yes.
deep weirdo is really beautiful. made me smile
on an ugly day.:] thank you.
much love,
weirdo s'
damn. you amaze me with your level of everything.
commitment to start with. so much to learn.:]
ah, i knew you would smile reading this. the story
is one you know at different levels. yes yes yes.
all the more, yes.
deep weirdo is really beautiful. made me smile
on an ugly day.:] thank you.
much love,
weirdo s'
12th Aug 2012 2:21am
[ for.her ]
This wraps the gift of your poem right up, securing, yet it leaves room for the mind to wander down the trail you've paved for us readers.
It's a trail made up of pure and perfect [imperfect] woman, lying somewhere that is desolate yet breathtaking...and the rest locked in my mind.
True wonder, Sumeet. I thank you.
This wraps the gift of your poem right up, securing, yet it leaves room for the mind to wander down the trail you've paved for us readers.
It's a trail made up of pure and perfect [imperfect] woman, lying somewhere that is desolate yet breathtaking...and the rest locked in my mind.
True wonder, Sumeet. I thank you.
12th Aug 2012 4:58am
sublime
such joy to have you around.
such joy you are as a reader. warms my heart.:]
thank you again. for stopping by and finding this
one out. i will have to agree with everything you
have said here. perfect/imperfect yes. the latter
and yet the former. ambiguous. real and unreal.
a whole new level.:] yes.
you are most welcome.
i can go to sleep with a smile.
light,
sumeet
such joy to have you around.
such joy you are as a reader. warms my heart.:]
thank you again. for stopping by and finding this
one out. i will have to agree with everything you
have said here. perfect/imperfect yes. the latter
and yet the former. ambiguous. real and unreal.
a whole new level.:] yes.
you are most welcome.
i can go to sleep with a smile.
light,
sumeet
