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My Dungeon
Black fingers tracing
their way along my spine
demons dancing in the ashes
from the endless cigarettes i've smoked
Shadows crossing my vision
reaching into my soul
with poisonous tendrils
that inject despair
Broken toys litter the floor
from the abuse of my anguished
inner child throwing tantrums
begging to be let out of this tomb
A cracked mirror
hangs in the center
of my blackened dungeon
showing the decrepit nature of my soul
Chains hang from the ceiling
a masochistic ego slashes at my flesh
with a cat o' nine tails
cutting deep adding salt to my wounds
From my key board I bleed out my words
an escape from the madness
that looms here
where there are no doors
A window from which I can peer out from
is stained with my depression
my saviour i persist in looking out of
with poetry on the horizon
their way along my spine
demons dancing in the ashes
from the endless cigarettes i've smoked
Shadows crossing my vision
reaching into my soul
with poisonous tendrils
that inject despair
Broken toys litter the floor
from the abuse of my anguished
inner child throwing tantrums
begging to be let out of this tomb
A cracked mirror
hangs in the center
of my blackened dungeon
showing the decrepit nature of my soul
Chains hang from the ceiling
a masochistic ego slashes at my flesh
with a cat o' nine tails
cutting deep adding salt to my wounds
From my key board I bleed out my words
an escape from the madness
that looms here
where there are no doors
A window from which I can peer out from
is stained with my depression
my saviour i persist in looking out of
with poetry on the horizon
Published 24th Jun 2012
| Edited 25th Jun 2012
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24th Jun 2012 9:34pm
You bleed in ink wonderfully keep releasing Crim, it's good for the soul.
Great write and expression.
Great write and expression.
25th Jun 2012 6:04pm
Anonymous
24th Jun 2012 9:47pm
Beautifully written
Cathartic
Cathartic
24th Jun 2012 9:50pm
25th Jun 2012 6:05pm
Anonymous
24th Jun 2012 10:06pm
the screen is your canvas, and your words are your art...you have displayed it beautifully here :) thank you for sharing
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26th Jun 2012 2:38am
YOur ability to vividly take your reader where you are at that very moment...is a gift
keep writing My Crim...keep cleansing that beautiful soul of yours!
keep writing My Crim...keep cleansing that beautiful soul of yours!
26th Jun 2012 6:41pm
26th Jun 2012 9:09am
Wow. This left me a bit speechless Crim. Magnificently written. Every emotion is felt with each carefully picked image. Very impressive. :)
Thank you for showing us your dungeon.
Thank you for showing us your dungeon.
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