Impassable and Plausible

Mr A

I could replace the web meaning of 'transcendent' by replacing all that lustreless gibberish with this poem.:)

The last line is a golden touch, sir.

There is a sense of exhilaration one feels while reading this. I don't have anything to offer other than recommending it as an anti-depressant.

Respect,

Sumeet

Why thank you, Sumeet.
Glad you liked it.

Globes and coronation. Is this your secret expatriate jubilee poem Mr A? I jest, of course. The last line is very well put. I am wondering if the next to last line might read better, though it changes the meaning slightly as "I don't belong in the belly of this godlike season" Perhaps it is too far astray. Fine little gem in your crown that you have here.

Well, I am very patriotic at heart. I keep a picture of the queen in my left trouser pocket at all times 'cause that's the side I hang to(I jest, of course).

Your suggestion does read much smoother than my eye sore, but it gives a total different perspective from what I intended.

Thanks for your time, ideas and reading, braggman.

short n just beautiful!
what an unimaginable mix-up..a very unfitting mood in this beautiful queen of a season!! bows Poet A!!

Thank you.

Uplifing with great imagination..a gem!..peace Crim

Thank you, Crim. Peace.

I love that second to last line - feels as much a confession to the narrator as to the reader. And following that rain at the start, has this cathartic feel to it too - like an upheaval. Which sits perfect amongst full and expectant (if that makes sense) words like 'globe' and 'belly'. I thought it was interesting how the tumult of the start of spring and phrases like 'I don't belong...' are followed by the clam and measured tone of 'though I do admire...'. And Im still puzzling over what the title suggests. :)

Yeah the whole poem is a moment of clarity and somewhat of a confession.

You read it so well, Merda. The globes were actually meant to be rain drops forming on spring's new growth(coronation).

The title just means it's something that can't be avoided, because I would if I could and for the season that spring is, it has its good points. Hope that makes sense.

Thanks for visiting this one.