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Abominable Passage
She is the devourer of weary souls
Lifeless left living in devotion.
The matriarch of blinded communion
A Manipulator without affection.
Her tendrils seek abominable passage
Through synapses she writes her will
Always taking without proposal
Her thralls are coerced into her bidding
Through the hands of the vacant
She commits atrocities without regret
All while keeping her integrity
Pristine from the stain of her slaughter
Words malignant with her forced intent
She loves the way they struggle
Thrashing against her constriction
Maiming themselves against her mechanisms
They mutilate themselves into gore
Their brains shredded into submission
As sycophants they follow
The fawning parasites of tragedy
With them she will continue to augment
Her reign spreading with oppressive fire
Eventually none will be able to deny
The arbitrary extinction of their free will
They will all fall to their knees
Their hemorrhaged organs a sacrifice
She laughs at the affliction she's manifested
Dictating the thoughts of her masses
She leaves nothing for her chattel
They are not worthy of her presence
Their only purpose is to further her genocide
Fueled by her yearnings of ascendancy
She will overthrow the mantel of society
The world made to her distorted image
None will escape as she grows
Her spawn devouring all in her path
Lifeless left living in devotion.
The matriarch of blinded communion
A Manipulator without affection.
Her tendrils seek abominable passage
Through synapses she writes her will
Always taking without proposal
Her thralls are coerced into her bidding
Through the hands of the vacant
She commits atrocities without regret
All while keeping her integrity
Pristine from the stain of her slaughter
Words malignant with her forced intent
She loves the way they struggle
Thrashing against her constriction
Maiming themselves against her mechanisms
They mutilate themselves into gore
Their brains shredded into submission
As sycophants they follow
The fawning parasites of tragedy
With them she will continue to augment
Her reign spreading with oppressive fire
Eventually none will be able to deny
The arbitrary extinction of their free will
They will all fall to their knees
Their hemorrhaged organs a sacrifice
She laughs at the affliction she's manifested
Dictating the thoughts of her masses
She leaves nothing for her chattel
They are not worthy of her presence
Their only purpose is to further her genocide
Fueled by her yearnings of ascendancy
She will overthrow the mantel of society
The world made to her distorted image
None will escape as she grows
Her spawn devouring all in her path
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Re: Abominable Passage
Anonymous
10th Jun 2012 8:18am
Beautifully written.. the terms and vocabulary used here really sink in.. I feel as if my work is in lacking to yours, in all honesty, well done..
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Re: Abominable Passage
10th Jun 2012 8:41am
PROFOUND! Brilliantly delivered metaphorically! I LOVE, LOVE, LOVE this! :-)
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10th Jun 2012 8:54pm
Re: Abominable Passage
10th Jun 2012 8:52pm
Marvelous use of diction, it really pulls people in. A gleefully malicious write, keep it up, seriously!
Duncan
Duncan
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10th Jun 2012 8:53pm
Re: Abominable Passage
10th Jun 2012 8:55pm
You are very talented..I would have to quote the entire poem to pick out my favorite lines..this poem blew me away..peace Crim
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Re: Abominable Passage
10th Jun 2012 9:39pm
Re: Abominable Passage
12th Jun 2012 3:05am
As a new poet I look to yours as inspiration to continue my writings.
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Re: Abominable Passage
12th Jun 2012 7:38pm
"The arbitrary extinction of their free will"
Loved this line. Gives a lot to think about.
Harrowing and descriptive poem. great writing, great work.
Loved this line. Gives a lot to think about.
Harrowing and descriptive poem. great writing, great work.
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13th Jun 2012 3:36am
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Re: Abominable Passage
30th Aug 2012 7:59am
This is visceral and profound in ways far too numerous to tell of! A great work, of much deep and dark meaning. All of your poems are truly masterpieces, my friend! You are very gifted.
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Re: Abominable Passage
23rd Sep 2012 4:10am
She leaves nothing for her chattel
They are not worthy of her presence
Their only purpose is to further her genocide
Fueled by her yearnings of ascendancy
Absolutely loved this verse. Well done
They are not worthy of her presence
Their only purpose is to further her genocide
Fueled by her yearnings of ascendancy
Absolutely loved this verse. Well done
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Re: Abominable Passage
23rd Sep 2012 5:07am
Re: Abominable Passage
5th Oct 2012 5:11am
I love the language her, and the subject. The being isn't so much a person as a force of nature, unable to be dismissed or stopped. Some of the lines are genuinely squishy, which I like. I would enjoy to see you focus the piece to create a more concrete rising and falling of action. It is there now, but not as clearly as you would want, which would help set the structure, and in turn the message.
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Re: Abominable Passage
25th Oct 2012 8:03am
you know, your range of vocabulary is astounding at times, descriptive, sharp, sometimes cold as steel, always fitting.
this is a fine example.
shine on.
this is a fine example.
shine on.
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re: Re: Abominable Passage
25th Oct 2012 8:06am
Re: Abominable Passage
30th Jan 2013 2:47am
Beautiful work. Are you a spoken word artist? This has a great flow to it.
On a side note, I think I may have dated this one... It did not end well, LOL.
On a side note, I think I may have dated this one... It did not end well, LOL.
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re: Re: Abominable Passage
30th Jan 2013 2:50am
No, I haven't done any spoken word, but have thought about it, thanks for the comment. :)
Re. Abominable Passage
25th Mar 2024 00:21am
On the themes of dark and horror, it encumbers a Lovecraftian feel that leaves the reader with a sense of awe and wonder.
Nicely penned.
Nicely penned.
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