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He Spotted Elizabeth Nude Sunbathing
David walked on the beach.
That's before he spotted Elizabeth nude sunbathing.
Then, the tide came in.
That made Elizabeth look up at David.
She stood and pulled his shorts down.
That's before he spotted Elizabeth nude sunbathing.
Then, the tide came in.
That made Elizabeth look up at David.
She stood and pulled his shorts down.
Published 28th Mar 2025
Author's Note
This awesoku poem is about what one guy has seen a friend doing on a local beach before she comes up with something else.
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29th Mar 2025 7:54pm
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