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Poor lost little girl
in a whirl of my own
no-one can heed my cry
for it seems that the world
are all wearing skirts
while I'm trapped
in a suit & a tie
Out on a date
the best things must wait
protocol
shall be obeyed
the chit & the chat--
pinkies petting a cat
beneath napkins coyly arrayed
Yes, I find my own grooves
delightfully smooth
unlocking pure sensual desires
so all through the meal
I sit & I feel
secretly stoking my fires
But eyes turn to mist
as the main course arrives
for beef is the dish of the day
too macho, too meaty--
this gristle's absurd
Ooh waiter,
please toss mine away
Dessert is a bore
& coffee's a chore
I cant wait to sizzle
alone
in bed with the broom
wearing silk pantaloons
without panties
to stifle my play
in a whirl of my own
no-one can heed my cry
for it seems that the world
are all wearing skirts
while I'm trapped
in a suit & a tie
Out on a date
the best things must wait
protocol
shall be obeyed
the chit & the chat--
pinkies petting a cat
beneath napkins coyly arrayed
Yes, I find my own grooves
delightfully smooth
unlocking pure sensual desires
so all through the meal
I sit & I feel
secretly stoking my fires
But eyes turn to mist
as the main course arrives
for beef is the dish of the day
too macho, too meaty--
this gristle's absurd
Ooh waiter,
please toss mine away
Dessert is a bore
& coffee's a chore
I cant wait to sizzle
alone
in bed with the broom
wearing silk pantaloons
without panties
to stifle my play
Published 28th May 2012
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28th May 2012 11:44am
This is done in your wonderfully abstract style, which I'm happy to have discovered. It's nice to read something both unique and interesting in a sea of cliches. An unexpected and well written sensual journey.
29th May 2012 9:57am
Style - now there's a thing - I'm kinda glad I don't know what mine is. The way I usually feel about things no two poems should be the same - so I generally aim to write differently to the last one even if it means a waltz with cliche from time to time.
Thanks for your visit.
Best ~ Abra
Thanks for your visit.
Best ~ Abra
28th May 2012 10:08pm
i must agree with Indie. It's a wonderful poem in its abstract images yet they somehow fit perfectly with each other.
Rhyming has become a boring chore but you somehow brought it to another level!
keep it up!
Rhyming has become a boring chore but you somehow brought it to another level!
keep it up!
29th May 2012 10:05am
Hi Ophie
I think any poet worth a rasher of bacon has to post in rhyme occasionally altho (mainly due to the explosion in free verse) I used to hate it big time.
On reflection that's strange because for me the poetry I loved as a child was mostly of the rhyming variety.
So thank you for bringing me to that realisation.
Best ~ Abra
I think any poet worth a rasher of bacon has to post in rhyme occasionally altho (mainly due to the explosion in free verse) I used to hate it big time.
On reflection that's strange because for me the poetry I loved as a child was mostly of the rhyming variety.
So thank you for bringing me to that realisation.
Best ~ Abra
