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#1 Train Downtown
You have 30 seconds to tell me you love me
Above ground on the subway
Heading into the tunnel
I love you ...
Above ground on the subway
Heading into the tunnel
I love you ...
Published Yesterday
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Redux Subway Poem
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Yesterday 12:53pm
Aww definitely feel this urgency before going into the tunnel. Enjoyed this piece
Yesterday 12:55pm
You live here, you know
Leaving 125th Street heading to 116th underground
Thx Fia
Leaving 125th Street heading to 116th underground
Thx Fia
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Yesterday 3:22pm
The incredible thing about short, potent pieces like this is that it's perfect in its literal translation...& equally fantastic for those of us with metaphorically activated minds. I could take this in so many places in my head. Fantastic!
Yesterday 3:35pm
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Yesterday 8:08pm
Yes, I wrote this in remembrance around 9/11 one year.
That urgency to get a message across still stays with me ...
Thx PD
Appreciate
That urgency to get a message across still stays with me ...
Thx PD
Appreciate
Yesterday 10:58pm
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Today 4:50am
Passionately penned, Speak. Great read, my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
Today 10:11am
Today 10:25am
Yes, so many contexts in which one can take this poem. There are no wrong answers.There's a poignancy about it when we learn of the background to the story & what inspired it.
Today 10:43am
I used to ride this train often and each time we were headed for the darkness of the tunnel I thought of the ones I love and loved ..l
