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red, red wine...
I've got an 80s beat riding my mind
so come on, baby...stroke me...
give me some bump & grind
...rub me...burn me...
baby, turn me...inside out & upside down
you're gonna need both hands now
grip me...flip me...hit me with your best shot
any way you want it...take on me...
I got an itch...& it's urgent
but I know you can reach it
spread me like your centerfold
trace fingers along my glistening crease
watch me freeze frame as you tease
I'll be lovin' every minute of it
all fired up...delirious
with your lovin', touchin', squeezin'
...your kiss has me straight up shameless
don't stop till you get enough
pour some sugar on me...you know I want candy
I'm so excited...like a cherry bomb you lit...
keep your hungry eyes on my wick as you inch...deeper
don't you look away...stay all night with me, baby
you oughta know how far I'll go
nothing compares 2 you
your love is king...the sweetest taboo of sexual healing
give me all your lovin'
name your desire...pull up to the bumper
jump into my danger zone
come on baby, light my fire
your satisfaction is my perogative...it's imperative
I'm hot-blooded...giving all I've got to give
...all night long
so what do you say
do I just let go & lose self control
your lascivious little maniac
or do I cap this bottle
send your wild desert angel to bed
& call it a night...
so come on, baby...stroke me...
give me some bump & grind
...rub me...burn me...
baby, turn me...inside out & upside down
you're gonna need both hands now
grip me...flip me...hit me with your best shot
any way you want it...take on me...
I got an itch...& it's urgent
but I know you can reach it
spread me like your centerfold
trace fingers along my glistening crease
watch me freeze frame as you tease
I'll be lovin' every minute of it
all fired up...delirious
with your lovin', touchin', squeezin'
...your kiss has me straight up shameless
don't stop till you get enough
pour some sugar on me...you know I want candy
I'm so excited...like a cherry bomb you lit...
keep your hungry eyes on my wick as you inch...deeper
don't you look away...stay all night with me, baby
you oughta know how far I'll go
nothing compares 2 you
your love is king...the sweetest taboo of sexual healing
give me all your lovin'
name your desire...pull up to the bumper
jump into my danger zone
come on baby, light my fire
your satisfaction is my perogative...it's imperative
I'm hot-blooded...giving all I've got to give
...all night long
so what do you say
do I just let go & lose self control
your lascivious little maniac
or do I cap this bottle
send your wild desert angel to bed
& call it a night...
Author's Note
Copyright @ Willow. All rights reserved
Happy Friday, folks! Feel free to date check...I was a little tipsy with this one. ๐
Happy Friday, folks! Feel free to date check...I was a little tipsy with this one. ๐
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Re. red, red wine...
14th Mar 2025 3:11pm
I love that song by UB40. Its fine we all write at interesting moments. lol Love the poem
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16th Mar 2025 4:52pm
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16th Mar 2025 4:53pm
80s has me wrapped around it's twitching pinky finger. Thank you, PoetSpeak
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14th Mar 2025 5:05pm
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16th Mar 2025 4:54pm
I have a drink...or more...& wake up to this kinda thing scribbled. Used to post them as bottlecaps but they might just as well go up casually at this point. Thank you, Betty
Re. red, red wine...
14th Mar 2025 6:33pm
A sexy song mixed with a number of song phrases the reader could spend time trying to recognise and count and identify the artists. These were the most recognisable lines:
nothing compares 2 you
your love is king...the sweetest taboo of sexual healing
give me all your lovin'
(Respective artists - Sinead O'Connor, Sade, Marvin Gaye and ZZ Top)
nothing compares 2 you
your love is king...the sweetest taboo of sexual healing
give me all your lovin'
(Respective artists - Sinead O'Connor, Sade, Marvin Gaye and ZZ Top)
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16th Mar 2025 4:55pm
I have an eclectic musical taste but the 80s has always been my sweet spot. Thank you, Solomon
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16th Mar 2025 4:56pm
That makes 2 of us...or more, by the look of comments. Thank you, Thor_Azine
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15th Mar 2025 00:08am
Brilliantly penned, Willow. Into the list it belongs. Love all the song references, my friend. Great read. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
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16th Mar 2025 4:58pm
Did I stick to the 80s in my tipsy state? I didn't check. ๐ Thank you, Damian
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16th Mar 2025 4:59pm
I watched all this blowing up MTV when it hit the screen. Memories...kept me sane. Thank you, girl
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15th Mar 2025 12:37pm
Girl imma miss your reads, tipsy or not ๐คฃ they are always a joy to read so be sure to still send me some writes after this ground is gone ๐ฅน
Love to you always ๐ฅฐ
-Ginger bitch out โ๐ป
Love to you always ๐ฅฐ
-Ginger bitch out โ๐ป
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15th Mar 2025 12:43pm
The smiles this one gave me, love me some 80's :-)
...this is so clever and sensually seductive...
( makes me wanna get drunk with you sometime)
...this is so clever and sensually seductive...
( makes me wanna get drunk with you sometime)
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16th Mar 2025 5:01pm
We got about 2 hours once I get drunk...then it's lights out. Zzzzz ๐ Thank you, sis ๐
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15th Mar 2025 10:53pm
Good stuff here
GOD BLESS YOU GIRL
READING THIS
I REALLY THOUGHT I WAS INSIDE YOU
LMAO
GOD BLESS YOU GIRL
READING THIS
I REALLY THOUGHT I WAS INSIDE YOU
LMAO
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16th Mar 2025 5:01pm
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16th Mar 2025 7:53am
Creative and cool...
I am fascinated
by memes and
pop culture...
Your application
was stellar...
I am fascinated
by memes and
pop culture...
Your application
was stellar...
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16th Mar 2025 5:02pm
I credit the alcohol with the journey but the 80s for the inspiration. Thank you, Warlord
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18th Mar 2025 10:57pm
Love the playful, seductive and humorous poem.. I hope you got to let go and lose some self control.. it's always fun doing that!!!
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