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Are We Lost? Goodbye everybody huge thank you to everyone
Are we lost?
There is no path to follow
There used to be a path
I swear there was a path once
Lost in the trees
There was a point to life
But we've lost it
Some one has hold of the point
And they are prodding us with it
Prodding those who have lost the point
There's a bad case of viral ignorance
Infectious
Burning across the land
Like a forest fire
Burning ignorance
Freezing ignorance
Chopping ignorance
Murderous ignorance
Burning burning burning
Burning across the land like wild fire
But we are not lost
Published 13th Mar 2025
| Edited 23rd Mar 2025
Author's Note
Goodbye everyone...thanks for everything. Thanks for all the help with my writing. Thanks for all the support with my mental health. I have no way to repay you except for my words
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14th Mar 2025 00:32am
I agree with your well- penned sentiments.
I've enjoyed your work and your comments. Take care.
I've enjoyed your work and your comments. Take care.
14th Mar 2025 2:09pm
Thank you for reading.
It's shame the site is ending. But it has been a great help to me and many others.
Kind regards
James
It's shame the site is ending. But it has been a great help to me and many others.
Kind regards
James
14th Mar 2025 2:06am
14th Mar 2025 2:10pm
Thank you for all the support.
Enjoy your writing now and beyond.
Kind regards
James
Enjoy your writing now and beyond.
Kind regards
James
14th Mar 2025 7:59am
Your ink gave me the guts to write w abandon, spilling it ALL out there sans fear. Ty for that.
Your forever fan - B
Your forever fan - B
14th Mar 2025 2:12pm
I want to thank you for all your amazing comments and support. It has given me strength to continue my writing.
You are a fearsome poet my friend. Enjoy your writing now and beyond.
Thank you.
Kind regards
James
You are a fearsome poet my friend. Enjoy your writing now and beyond.
Thank you.
Kind regards
James
25th Mar 2025 12:26pm
25th Mar 2025 1:02pm
Thank you.
It's amazing what a long walk in the woods can do for inspiration.
Kind regards
James
It's amazing what a long walk in the woods can do for inspiration.
Kind regards
James
