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The Lonliness
The loneliness
It grabs at my heart
The loneliness
An affair from the start
The loneliness
You pulled me in
The loneliness
I'm your broken sin
The loneliness
I hope and pray
The loneliness
You made me pay
Chorus
I was wrong, wrong, wrong
Never knew how to be strong
I was wrong, wrong, wrong
I'm no hero till I'm gone
You took me in
You gave me a pen
You showed me your bed
You gave me head
You fed me your food
Changed my dark mood
Washed my dirty shirt
Love songs I did blurt
I'm trying to change
But my heart is mange
I'm a dirty dog
My life in the bog
I was wrong, wrong, wrong
My loneliness a song
I was wrong, wrong, wrong
My heart beats long ....
It grabs at my heart
The loneliness
An affair from the start
The loneliness
You pulled me in
The loneliness
I'm your broken sin
The loneliness
I hope and pray
The loneliness
You made me pay
Chorus
I was wrong, wrong, wrong
Never knew how to be strong
I was wrong, wrong, wrong
I'm no hero till I'm gone
You took me in
You gave me a pen
You showed me your bed
You gave me head
You fed me your food
Changed my dark mood
Washed my dirty shirt
Love songs I did blurt
I'm trying to change
But my heart is mange
I'm a dirty dog
My life in the bog
I was wrong, wrong, wrong
My loneliness a song
I was wrong, wrong, wrong
My heart beats long ....
Author's Note
I never wrote a song before
Is this a song ?
I don't know
Maybe I should go
Inspired by Jason Isbell's new release "Foxes in the Snow"
Is this a song ?
I don't know
Maybe I should go
Inspired by Jason Isbell's new release "Foxes in the Snow"
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Re. The Lonliness
Yesterday 7:47pm
Re: Re. The Lonliness
Yesterday 8:29pm
Thanks so much ID
It's my first attempt at song writing
Wrote it fast
Maybe that's the key
Appreciate your comment RL
Means a lot to me ..
It's my first attempt at song writing
Wrote it fast
Maybe that's the key
Appreciate your comment RL
Means a lot to me ..
Re. The Lonliness
Yesterday 7:54pm
Re: Re. The Lonliness
Yesterday 8:31pm
Never wrote a song before
Maybe a new avenue for this old cowboy 🤠
BIG THANKS Fia
Maybe a new avenue for this old cowboy 🤠
BIG THANKS Fia
Re. The Lonliness
Yesterday 8:28pm
Re: Re. The Lonliness
Yesterday 8:33pm
Re. The Lonliness
Yesterday 9:18pm
Re: Re. The Lonliness
Yesterday 9:26pm
Thanks so much Keith
I wanted to do this one day and it it turned out to be today ...
Appreciate
I wanted to do this one day and it it turned out to be today ...
Appreciate
Re. The Lonliness
Yesterday 9:43pm
Heck yeah! Nice job. Now you just need to sing it! Come on, I know you can...
❤️k
❤️k
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Re: Re. The Lonliness
IDK
I've got a singing voice like a open can of cat food left out in the sun.
Translation: unpleasant
Then again look at Dylan...
Thanks k 😍
:
I've got a singing voice like a open can of cat food left out in the sun.
Translation: unpleasant
Then again look at Dylan...
Thanks k 😍
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Re. The Lonliness
Yesterday 9:54pm
Re: Re. The Lonliness
Yesterday 9:57pm
Wow
I’m happy to hear that Willow
Do you ever listen to Jason Isbell ?
He really inspires me ..
Thanks !
I’m happy to hear that Willow
Do you ever listen to Jason Isbell ?
He really inspires me ..
Thanks !
Re. The Lonliness
Yesterday 10:07pm
Re: Re. The Lonliness
Yesterday 10:24pm
BiG THANKS WENDY !!
Got these first line in my head and then was off to the races ..,
Stay tuned ..
Got these first line in my head and then was off to the races ..,
Stay tuned ..
Re. The Lonliness
I feel this is a song as This has deepness and depth and confidence and real evidence of emotions, for sure loneliness is a hard thing to deal with in life and love but yet we sometimes have to learn to navigate through the process of the storms of life 💪👊👍
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Re: Re. The Lonliness
Yesterday 11:33pm
Yes
Absolutely Stoney
This is the trials and tribulations of romance.
Ebb and flow in a lyrical attempt …
Thank you Sir
Absolutely Stoney
This is the trials and tribulations of romance.
Ebb and flow in a lyrical attempt …
Thank you Sir
Re: Re. The Lonliness
Yesterday 11:44pm
Not bad at writing skills to create a song of loneliness, that has the depth and deepness built from inner emotions and genuine feelings ✍️👏💪👍👊💯
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Re: Re. The Lonliness
Yesterday 11:48pm
It kind of wrote itself once I got going.
All these years listening the great songwriters finally is paying dividends ..
All these years listening the great songwriters finally is paying dividends ..
Re: Re. The Lonliness
Today 00:29am
Poetspeak rebirth!
Hey, you never know what's buried beneath...
Thx for your comment and RL trophy
Wow !!
Hey, you never know what's buried beneath...
Thx for your comment and RL trophy
Wow !!
Re. The Lonliness
Today 00:28am
Re: Re. The Lonliness
Today 2:34am