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a bit longer poem
a chap in work
whom I didn’t get on with
but rather admired
recently died
after he’d retired and I wished
he’d have lived
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Re. a bit longer poem
16th Feb 2025 5:55pm
loved the title much :)
it says the immensity of it’s poetic content in the verses sx
it says the immensity of it’s poetic content in the verses sx
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Re: Re. a bit longer poem
16th Feb 2025 11:37pm
I always think the title of a poem should encapsulate it,
or ignore it entirely
or ignore it entirely
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