Random Thoughts of Who We Used to Be

This is short but impactful.
I was so young (High School) with my first love. Feels like another lifetime ago.
When it didn't work out, I thought it would be the end of the world.
Turns out, not so much. LOL

Thank you, Adelphina.

Mine too.

Beautifully penned, Mary. Appreciate you.

Damian  

Thank you, Damian.

Wow. So much in so few words.

Thanks, Pink

I love the tight-ness of the syllable count as it flows beautifully and is a lovely poem. The last line is very thought provocative and leaves an impact for food for thought. The poem to me indicates love of this individual but also friction. Like you worship his/her body more than the inner soul of which troubles you.

Thank you, poet.
There was a lot of friction. Your last line was correct. It caused a lot of inner turmoil.

A portrayal of a one night stand, or the first time that did not lead to others with the same partner.

"the lies our bodies told" - imagine they were "I love you", "I'll stay with you", "I'll respect you in the morning!

Thank you, Sir Solomon

Brief but powerful. The write is honest & daring. Great work.

Thank You, Keith

Intimacy and contentment wrapped up by brevity.

Well done.

Thank you, Leo

damn. that last line. felt that. really enjoyed this one.

Thank you, friend.

They say that our first love will always be with us whether it was good or bad yet it left a lasting impression that will affect us in ways that we can never change the affect that it had upon the heart and soul and mind ❤️

He will. I have many thoughts on that, things better left unsaid.
Thank you for the visit my friend.

Respect Dear friend and POETESS 🙏🪬

Right back at ya, my friend. Just like it’s always been. Have a fantastic day.

You too enjoy your day and I pray for you with a beautiful recovery as you heal through the process 🙏

Thank you

You are truly welcome DEAR FRIEND AND POETESS 🙏🪬📿🪷

Damn girl...