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painting the moment
the doors slams
.you are gone
.
the air falls to
the floor defeated
and the roses on
the table can no
longer laugh
Published 9th Feb 2025
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9th Feb 2025 7:22am
9th Feb 2025 2:25pm
9th Feb 2025 7:32pm
This is not just painting the moment bk.. you seem to capture & freeze for a while .. & interpret their mysterious conspiring continuum .. of the casting elements that’s dancing colouring to the tune & hue of emotions .. in that eternity of love n the crazy lil mind n the melancholy of it all.. breathtaking!
17th Feb 2025 2:45am
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