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crowstone
diving into the whirlpool of love
i reached a fake fairyland where the cuckoo hypnotized me
the shiny origami ducks of magenta pecked my tender heart with intensity
lucid dreams, moist as porcelain, pricked me with needles
the butterflies tied my hands and dragged me into a blackhole...
i reached a fake fairyland where the cuckoo hypnotized me
the shiny origami ducks of magenta pecked my tender heart with intensity
lucid dreams, moist as porcelain, pricked me with needles
the butterflies tied my hands and dragged me into a blackhole...
Published 31st Jan 2025
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31st Jan 2025 6:34am
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Enjoyed this whimsical fantasy, wish you penned the other side of that black hole it ended too abruptly.
18th Feb 2025 4:24am
hello D
thank you very much for reading and giving your feedback... well as per the rules of a competition, it was necessary to express something in less words, that is why i did not write in deep...
thank you very much for reading and giving your feedback... well as per the rules of a competition, it was necessary to express something in less words, that is why i did not write in deep...
