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Antemeridian
She was a wee slip of a thing
hanging low in the trees;
a coquette on a wild fling
yet eager to appease.
It was quick like silver she came
and just as quickly went,
like a wispy alchemist flame
that heaven gently sent.
Breaking day wouldn't let her be
so soon she'd disappear,
to blend in morning liberty
with daybreak atmosphere.
She went to kiss her darling sun
to feel young and new
before she once again got spun...
into the midnight blue!
hanging low in the trees;
a coquette on a wild fling
yet eager to appease.
It was quick like silver she came
and just as quickly went,
like a wispy alchemist flame
that heaven gently sent.
Breaking day wouldn't let her be
so soon she'd disappear,
to blend in morning liberty
with daybreak atmosphere.
She went to kiss her darling sun
to feel young and new
before she once again got spun...
into the midnight blue!
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Re. Antemeridian
26th Jan 2025 6:38pm
Re: Re. Antemeridian
26th Jan 2025 8:08pm
Thanks!
The moon's running really low right now so I was lucky to have seen it at all:)
The moon's running really low right now so I was lucky to have seen it at all:)
Re. Antemeridian
26th Jan 2025 6:49pm
This is beautiful reminds me of willow wisps leading people into the forest. Enjoyed this
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Re: Re. Antemeridian
26th Jan 2025 8:12pm
Thanks, Fia!
I've never seen one of those, but maybe that's a good thing, eh?
It did look a little like an old Irish pixie in the sticks:)
I've never seen one of those, but maybe that's a good thing, eh?
It did look a little like an old Irish pixie in the sticks:)
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26th Jan 2025 10:28pm
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27th Jan 2025 4:52am
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27th Jan 2025 5:14am
Thanks Damian!
Hey, don't forget...Chinese New Year is in a couple of days:)
Hey, don't forget...Chinese New Year is in a couple of days:)
Re. Antemeridian
28th Jan 2025 11:00am
This is such epic in your style of nature n love in all it’s sensualism & beauty & romance that i relate .. your meteorological diction is flawless n poetic at the same time.. amazing as ever dear adored Poet .. will add to my list sure once i free sone 🙏 xx
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Re: Re. Antemeridian
28th Jan 2025 11:15am
Many thanks to you, Uma 😊
I can't spend enough time looking at the sky 👁️👁️
I can't spend enough time looking at the sky 👁️👁️
Re. Antemeridian
2nd Feb 2025 7:04pm
Loving the romantic rendezvous, visually stunning in all these colors and descriptions.
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2nd Feb 2025 9:55pm
There's nothing quite like a skyscape to inspire the writes, except a beautiful lady, of course:)