intimacy

Sweet sin came into existence.  What a great line to a great poem. That's the kind of sin I'll never turn down. I wish I could be him tasting you. I'm sure he was in nirvana.

liked your words very much... there is a hunger hidden in them... stay tuned, may be your wish will come true soon...

I could visualise the embraced meeting in these verse:

as soon as he put his head on my shoulder
i became like an evening even in the middle of the day

as soon as he moved his brush laden with hot ink on my lips
i scattered on his chest like the colours of a rainbow

as soon as he pressed my muffins,
i bowed down like a plant in shame

thanks SS for reading me so deeply...

Beautiful write, dimpy. Appreciate you.

Damian

many thanks D...

I do notice your sincere effort to make this truly "poetic", and you did it well. It's a very tender and not too vivid write. Great word choices. Well done, Dimpy. Great write.

I like your feedback...thanks you...

Cosmic ethereal and sexy ....

Hitting all the marks d ...

BIG

thank you for reading...

As soon as it read it
I feel sensation between legs
Crave for more always...💜🤤

Ha ha
Same here... More... More n more

Splendid imagery.

thanks dennis... :)

Very stimulating read had my eyes popping like an emoji

thank you for such a delicious comment...