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a blue river has
frozen in the vast sky
it is searching for
its traces on the
subtle layers of the earth
the shores
woven like nests
have become distorted
the souls of grey stones
are clashing
with the dry fields
stray winds
caused havoc
in the forests
and made a deep
friendship with
the flames of fire
golden spoon people
sleeping in a deep sleep
have started creating chaos
bumblebees intoxicated
by the sweet fragrance
have started fainting
the dewy evening
started drowning
in polluted smoke
the beautiful world
started running away
with the help of a hope...
Published 21st Jan 2025
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perfect detail and images. entire towns have been erased.
your writing is exquisite.
your writing is exquisite.
21st Jan 2025 3:50pm
21st Jan 2025 4:59pm
It's an impossible situation to process.
Rich or poor out dwellings are our sanctuaries...
Rich or poor out dwellings are our sanctuaries...
21st Jan 2025 5:47pm
Mr... here, no attention has been paid to wealth or poverty... this is just an attempt to say that we are all helpless in front of the fury of nature...
21st Jan 2025 6:10pm
22nd Jan 2025 1:20am
yeah
when I wrote this, i had never thought that my words would be interpreted in such a way...well, if you are hurt then sorry.. i just wanted to give some sympathy, wanted to show helplessness of people...jus like we too became helpless in front of floods and earthquakes...
when I wrote this, i had never thought that my words would be interpreted in such a way...well, if you are hurt then sorry.. i just wanted to give some sympathy, wanted to show helplessness of people...jus like we too became helpless in front of floods and earthquakes...
22nd Jan 2025 3:18am
22nd Jan 2025 3:37am
I feel your despair deeply, dimpy. There's no running away from it, sadly. We all have to confront this! 🔥🌍
23rd Jan 2025 6:19am
23rd Jan 2025 9:59pm
Powerful write, dimpy. It is a horrible situation for sure. Nice ink. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
24th Jan 2025 2:04am
