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Broken

There has to be a line between art and gimmick
It’s a balancing act of getting the ratio just right
Knowing what to drop and what traits to mimic
Achieving desired delivery wrapping words tight

Don’t let the personality compromise the work
Remembering unwritten laws not often spoken
Better to be a wise soul than some random jerk
They’ll never break what’s already been broken



Copyright @ Damian DeadLove 2025
Written by DamianDeadLove (Damian DeadLove)
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Author's Note
Late night musing. Just thinking out loud. Appreciate you.


- Damian DeadLove

"Reflections in the mirror show
You are a face without a name."

- John Corabi
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