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Born with nothing
Bring in your gods
Before they rust
Young man
Born with nothing
Deep holes in his pockets and heart
Left to scream
Never heard
On any street in this world
Go ahead...
Pick a city
Any city
It don't matter
Born with nothing
Born to die
Before they rust
Young man
Born with nothing
Deep holes in his pockets and heart
Left to scream
Never heard
On any street in this world
Go ahead...
Pick a city
Any city
It don't matter
Born with nothing
Born to die
Published 27th Dec 2024
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27th Dec 2024 12:40pm
27th Dec 2024 12:46pm
27th Dec 2024 1:08pm
In every city there are those born with nothing, with tattered dreams.
I like this one.
I like this one.
27th Dec 2024 1:12pm
27th Dec 2024 1:55pm
Just open your mind and find the light! There is always light in darkness!
27th Dec 2024 2:01pm
27th Dec 2024 2:16pm
good morning dearest Keith there are many such souls that feel this way great write 💕
27th Dec 2024 2:22pm
28th Dec 2024 5:46am
Brilliantly penned, Keith. Into the list it belongs. Motörhead, it makes me think of them. You must of been channeling your inner, Lemmy. While still delivering as only you can, my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
28th Dec 2024 10:26am
Lemmy is a great lyricist. I may have subconsciously had him on my mind. I haven't listened to Motorhead in quite sometime. From their debut to No Remorse in 1984, all of their material is brilliant. Orgasmatron and RnR are weak. Then they bit back hard with 1916. After that, to me they were hit or miss.
Thanks Damian. I appreciate the RL and feedback.
Thanks Damian. I appreciate the RL and feedback.
28th Dec 2024 10:53pm
29th Dec 2024 12:38pm
