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Wonderland Secret
I once hung a garland of white
Protecting me from what goes bump in the night
I once laid a vine of red
Best-laid traps under my bed
Protection from the essence of you
Growling
Snarling
Trying to tear me right through
Gentling the touch
Timid in bravery.
Little did I know
You were not here to save me
Light as the snow
as it flutters
Landing on heated skin
Synchronized breaths
Words spoken with eyes
Knowing without saying
Truth in the cries
The moon will witness the pain
As we once again
Do this primal dance in vain
Enter
A path less traveled.
Yet, known by you
The gates open
Recognizing who worked the land
Who tilled the soil
Who watered the garden
To create Eden
There is much to do
Under the watchful eye
Of the moon
Take me
Break me
So I can rise
And glow
Bath me
Save me
With your
Darkness below
With fairy dust
And heated wishes or two
We came together
Wonderland never knew.
Protecting me from what goes bump in the night
I once laid a vine of red
Best-laid traps under my bed
Protection from the essence of you
Growling
Snarling
Trying to tear me right through
Gentling the touch
Timid in bravery.
Little did I know
You were not here to save me
Light as the snow
as it flutters
Landing on heated skin
Synchronized breaths
Words spoken with eyes
Knowing without saying
Truth in the cries
The moon will witness the pain
As we once again
Do this primal dance in vain
Enter
A path less traveled.
Yet, known by you
The gates open
Recognizing who worked the land
Who tilled the soil
Who watered the garden
To create Eden
There is much to do
Under the watchful eye
Of the moon
Take me
Break me
So I can rise
And glow
Bath me
Save me
With your
Darkness below
With fairy dust
And heated wishes or two
We came together
Wonderland never knew.
Author's Note
You ever wonder what Peter and Wendy were really up to? I mean he can fly
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Re. Wonderland Secret
27th Dec 2024 00:11am
Yeah, if I were him I'd have grabbed her as well, and gone somewhere private ☘️
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27th Dec 2024 1:08am
This is very good as well as the deepness of your mind thoughts flows from line to line✍️💪👍🙏🪬 SHAMAN 🪬
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27th Dec 2024 1:02pm
Thanks for sharing this story of the truth of the wonderland secret ✍️👍💗💪🪬 SHAMAN 🪬
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Anonymous
27th Dec 2024 1:59am
I don't know about Peter Pan...he may have rushed to Walmart after hearing boys' pants were half off.
I love the dreamy, selective rhyming in this piece. Great work.
I love the dreamy, selective rhyming in this piece. Great work.
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27th Dec 2024 4:24am
Seductive write, Fia. Into the list it belongs. Brilliantly executed, my friend. I liked this a lot. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
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27th Dec 2024 7:32am
Favourite verse (for sense of revelation amidst the eroticism):
The gates open
Recognizing who worked the land
Who tilled the soil
Who watered the garden
To create Eden (if you read your Genesis, it was THE MAN who first tilled the soil - makes gardening sexy to think of for me!]
The gates open
Recognizing who worked the land
Who tilled the soil
Who watered the garden
To create Eden (if you read your Genesis, it was THE MAN who first tilled the soil - makes gardening sexy to think of for me!]
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Re. Wonderland Secret
28th Dec 2024 1:34pm
These people look familiar
Wait
Why am I seeing my reflection staring back at me.... ?
Good stuff
To good
Scary ..
BIG LIKE
Wait
Why am I seeing my reflection staring back at me.... ?
Good stuff
To good
Scary ..
BIG LIKE
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