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Christmas day 2024
Started not with a snowy winter's.
Wonderland dream's
Rather a foggy hazing vista.
Yet it felt Ok & it felt right.
Getting endorphin hit from the view.
Aware I'm feeling so good.
In that I'm ok your ok kinda way.
Every Christmas has been different.
But I'v really loved today.
Spent with the love'st friend.
Who's trust and love.
I'll treasure beyond the grave.
Wonderland dream's
Rather a foggy hazing vista.
Yet it felt Ok & it felt right.
Getting endorphin hit from the view.
Aware I'm feeling so good.
In that I'm ok your ok kinda way.
Every Christmas has been different.
But I'v really loved today.
Spent with the love'st friend.
Who's trust and love.
I'll treasure beyond the grave.
Published 26th Dec 2024
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Just another day in life.
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26th Dec 2024 3:11am
Dear S,
I enjoyed your poem. For me, It wonderfully put a shine on the comfort of what the holiday is about and not just the shiny stuff. Although I don’t mind at all, a foggy hazy vista. Lovely write. H🌷
I enjoyed your poem. For me, It wonderfully put a shine on the comfort of what the holiday is about and not just the shiny stuff. Although I don’t mind at all, a foggy hazy vista. Lovely write. H🌷
Dear H,
I'm really pleased to read your lovely kind words. I think you got it as i meant it. magic of poetry.
Theres more to come.
Thank you. Shon x
I'm really pleased to read your lovely kind words. I think you got it as i meant it. magic of poetry.
Theres more to come.
Thank you. Shon x
