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green blue lust
screaming in the eyes,
salty legs parting
with fierce devotion,
calm resolution of
the sensual and youthful storm,
breaking of lemony walls,
hoarding warm and rich treasure..
screaming in the eyes,
salty legs parting
with fierce devotion,
calm resolution of
the sensual and youthful storm,
breaking of lemony walls,
hoarding warm and rich treasure..
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I like the way you put taste in this poem with lemon and salt. Really good
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