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Brittle
It’s dank outside today
It’s dank inside my heart too
the isolation I’ve created is impenetrable
the lack of self love has beaten me senseless
self loathing will be the death of me…
It’s dank inside my heart too
the isolation I’ve created is impenetrable
the lack of self love has beaten me senseless
self loathing will be the death of me…
Written by
Zazzles
(Broomie)
Published 17th Dec 2024
| Edited 18th Dec 2024
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Re. Brittle
17th Dec 2024 9:12pm
yes
know this feeling very well
you have conveyed a feeling I've carried for many years
know this feeling very well
you have conveyed a feeling I've carried for many years
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Re: Re. Brittle
18th Dec 2024 3:31am
Re. Brittle
17th Dec 2024 11:35pm
Yah neh.
You just took my insides and put them out there for everyone to see
You just took my insides and put them out there for everyone to see
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Re: Re. Brittle
18th Dec 2024 3:33am
Yeah it seems a lot of people feel this way.
Thanks for the visit P.O.T
Jackie ☺️
Thanks for the visit P.O.T
Jackie ☺️
Re. Brittle
18th Dec 2024 00:07am
Re: Re. Brittle
18th Dec 2024 3:33am
Re. Brittle
18th Dec 2024 4:14pm
Dear Zazzy,
However dark your words are there is a sense about them that make them yours. For me it had the beauty of an ice flower. Sending you a huge hug, your far Sister
xxx000
Rianne
However dark your words are there is a sense about them that make them yours. For me it had the beauty of an ice flower. Sending you a huge hug, your far Sister
xxx000
Rianne
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Re: Re. Brittle
18th Dec 2024 4:36pm
Hello my beautiful Norway Blossom❤️🫶🏻
I reflect a lot, you know, and I feel like I threw my life away, I haven’t really accomplished much; and what makes it really hard is the fact that I have all these amazing ideas in my head, but rarely execute any of them.
Thanks for the hugs bubby
Love always your sis
Jackie xoxox❤️
I reflect a lot, you know, and I feel like I threw my life away, I haven’t really accomplished much; and what makes it really hard is the fact that I have all these amazing ideas in my head, but rarely execute any of them.
Thanks for the hugs bubby
Love always your sis
Jackie xoxox❤️
Re: Re. Brittle
19th Dec 2024 4:24pm
Re. Brittle
19th Dec 2024 4:57am
Dear J,
Well then, we’ll love you until you can love yourself and realize your value and specialness. I would argue you you haven’t thrown away any part of your life. You wrote a fab book with a great storyline. That’s a great accomplishment. You did that.
H🌷
Well then, we’ll love you until you can love yourself and realize your value and specialness. I would argue you you haven’t thrown away any part of your life. You wrote a fab book with a great storyline. That’s a great accomplishment. You did that.
H🌷
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Re: Re. Brittle
19th Dec 2024 4:25pm
Hi Honoria, it’s so quiet here a lot and too much time to think you know. You are such an amazing woman. I love you. Thanks for stopping by.
❤️🎅🏼🎄
Jackie
❤️🎅🏼🎄
Jackie