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I know some of your secrets
I know enough
Maybe I’d like a few more
Perhaps not
I’m greedy
Not stupid
The fringe is paradise
Cold mornings
Despair in personal heat
You control my lust
Thermometer shatters
Mercury poisoning
Mercy ….
Maybe I’d like a few more
Perhaps not
I’m greedy
Not stupid
The fringe is paradise
Cold mornings
Despair in personal heat
You control my lust
Thermometer shatters
Mercury poisoning
Mercy ….
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Painting by Poetspeak
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11th Dec 2024 4:41pm
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Re. I know some of your secrets
Often my desire floats and the paintings back up the calling.
I’ll never stop until I run out of paint.
I’d slit my wrists for red if need be …
Damn
Now that’s a title
Thx DB
I’ll never stop until I run out of paint.
I’d slit my wrists for red if need be …
Damn
Now that’s a title
Thx DB
Re. I know some of your secrets
11th Dec 2024 5:31pm
Re: Re. I know some of your secrets
11th Dec 2024 5:32pm
Re. I know some of your secrets
11th Dec 2024 7:36pm
"The fringe is paradise" - yes! That razor edge between greedy and stupid, so intoxicating...
You nailed it as always
❤️k
You nailed it as always
❤️k
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Re: Re. I know some of your secrets
11th Dec 2024 7:52pm
Re. I know some of your secrets
11th Dec 2024 7:43pm
Sometimes mystery is sexier. That painting is...haunting & mysterious
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Re: Re. I know some of your secrets
11th Dec 2024 7:53pm
Re. I know some of your secrets
12th Dec 2024 00:22am
Re: Re. I know some of your secrets
12th Dec 2024 1:35am
A lot of things are good in the dark.
Sinning, secrets, doing stuff you shouldn't...
That's where the fun is ...
Sinning, secrets, doing stuff you shouldn't...
That's where the fun is ...
Re. I know some of your secrets
12th Dec 2024 00:54am
“The fringe is paradise”
A classic PS line. Reminds me of “lust on the half shell”
(Please tell me I got that right, lol)
I came back to comment and you switched up the painting! I like both but I think the other spoke to me more as far as this poem. It made me think of a cage, as in caged emotions and living on the fringe. This painting is much softer, almost if you’re stepping back, further back than what I envision the fringe to be.
A classic PS line. Reminds me of “lust on the half shell”
(Please tell me I got that right, lol)
I came back to comment and you switched up the painting! I like both but I think the other spoke to me more as far as this poem. It made me think of a cage, as in caged emotions and living on the fringe. This painting is much softer, almost if you’re stepping back, further back than what I envision the fringe to be.
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Re: Re. I know some of your secrets
12th Dec 2024 1:39am
Yes, you got the line right..
I switched to this painting to reflect the messiness of a broken thermometer. All that mercury infecting everything it touches.
I can't remember what the other painting was. Old sod that I am.
So you're back after a respite. I knew you would be. We are all addicted to this sugar word pill...
Good to see you yo ..
Thx M
I switched to this painting to reflect the messiness of a broken thermometer. All that mercury infecting everything it touches.
I can't remember what the other painting was. Old sod that I am.
So you're back after a respite. I knew you would be. We are all addicted to this sugar word pill...
Good to see you yo ..
Thx M
Re: Re. I know some of your secrets
12th Dec 2024 1:41am
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12th Dec 2024 1:49am
Re. I know some of your secrets
12th Dec 2024 11:30am
There's more to discover, more layers to peel when you don't know everything.
Gorgeous painting too - it fits your piece.
Gorgeous painting too - it fits your piece.
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Re: Re. I know some of your secrets
12th Dec 2024 12:04pm
I still discover new things everyday ...
You're absolutely correct D...
Yeah, I thought this painting worked well so switched it from the original.
Thx so much !
You're absolutely correct D...
Yeah, I thought this painting worked well so switched it from the original.
Thx so much !
Re. I know some of your secrets
13th Dec 2024 3:02am
Secrets are often hidden beneath many layers. Great write, Speak. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
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Re: Re. I know some of your secrets
13th Dec 2024 3:05am
Yes
We peel away the layers one at a time to reveal secrets and sometimes lies ....
Thx for the read and comment Damian ..
We peel away the layers one at a time to reveal secrets and sometimes lies ....
Thx for the read and comment Damian ..
Re. I know some of your secrets
14th Dec 2024 7:31pm
Intense write Poet. Relatable too. Liked the word play there at the end.
BL
BL
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Re: Re. I know some of your secrets
14th Dec 2024 9:18pm
Sometimes I wish I knew less.
There’s a burden wit the truth but onward we just go …
There’s a burden wit the truth but onward we just go …
Re. I know some of your secrets
25th Dec 2024 5:51pm