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Concordia Discors
Surely there's disorder within each mind
that graces the troublesome human race.
Why, necessarily, would it be kind
when chaos sparks thought all over the place?
The deviltry is in the details
which civilization will not master
when all it cares about are net sales
in the profit margin hereafter.
But chaos and creativity link
in the marbled columns of poetry
where order angels help the devils think
in divine terms of versatility....
prepared to host a devil's every thought
in the glory house of the polyglot.
that graces the troublesome human race.
Why, necessarily, would it be kind
when chaos sparks thought all over the place?
The deviltry is in the details
which civilization will not master
when all it cares about are net sales
in the profit margin hereafter.
But chaos and creativity link
in the marbled columns of poetry
where order angels help the devils think
in divine terms of versatility....
prepared to host a devil's every thought
in the glory house of the polyglot.
Published 3rd Dec 2024
| Edited 9th Jan 2025
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3rd Dec 2024 2:25pm
hello dearest poet I know I do this represent what is around us and in us we are formed of such great ink...💕
3rd Dec 2024 2:34pm
It's all about being familiar enough with the references to make the allegorical connections :)
3rd Dec 2024 3:20pm
title reminds of .. the destiny. whatever be te devilish deviousness & the raging deviltry (loved the usage of this word & emphasis of devilsomeness in your stanzas) the inner animal drives in towards destruction.. the calm souling eternity still is the light the truth.. poetry in itself is a testimony to the divinity that’s in the wholesome feel than the detailing gruesomeness we do to ourselves .. perhaps that triviality of death dark more is required to feel the love the essence.. just me in much wordishness evoked from your superb pen. love this. keep writing .
3rd Dec 2024 3:47pm
Many thanks!
I'm glad you liked it:)
That title is an old poetic duality concept rather similar to Yin and Yang.
I'm glad you liked it:)
That title is an old poetic duality concept rather similar to Yin and Yang.
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7th Dec 2024 6:37pm
"But chaos and creativity link
in the marbled columns of poetry"
Loved the visual imagery in this, it's strong and stunning.
Wonderful work.
in the marbled columns of poetry"
Loved the visual imagery in this, it's strong and stunning.
Wonderful work.
7th Dec 2024 9:00pm
I've always loved the idea of beauty being a mixture of a little crazy with a lotta care
