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I can feel it
I can feel it...
the sun on my face
the breeze in my hair
the joy in my gut
the spring in my strut
I can feel it...
the dark in my veins
the shame in my soul
the wrong in my right
the cry in the night
I don't know how to stop
I don't know how to feel it all
I want to shut my eyes
Let the cloak of numbness fall
To feel the love
is to know the hurt
.
the sun on my face
the breeze in my hair
the joy in my gut
the spring in my strut
I can feel it...
the dark in my veins
the shame in my soul
the wrong in my right
the cry in the night
I don't know how to stop
I don't know how to feel it all
I want to shut my eyes
Let the cloak of numbness fall
To feel the love
is to know the hurt
.
Author's Note
Another lost poem, pretty sure I never shared it.
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Re. I can feel it
3rd Dec 2024 00:27am
Dear K,
You’re killing me. Next lost poem you find could you please post it under my name? I should would appreciate it.
Fab write. H🌷
You’re killing me. Next lost poem you find could you please post it under my name? I should would appreciate it.
Fab write. H🌷
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Re: Re. I can feel it
3rd Dec 2024 00:44am
Thank you H, you are way too hard on yourself!
I also found "Sometimes I suck" (not a sex poem) and something along the lines of "Fuck your 'normal'". Feel free to use those as prompts! 😆
Thank you for always being such an encouraging reader & friend.
❤️k
I also found "Sometimes I suck" (not a sex poem) and something along the lines of "Fuck your 'normal'". Feel free to use those as prompts! 😆
Thank you for always being such an encouraging reader & friend.
❤️k
Re: Re. I can feel it
3rd Dec 2024 9:39pm
Re. I can feel it
3rd Dec 2024 1:05am
hello beautiful one I just wrote a poem called cringe because my anxiety is bad I can relate to this in my poem I came to the conclusion it's better to feel too much as oppossed to not at all hugs my friend 💕
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Re: Re. I can feel it
5th Dec 2024 00:37am
Yes, even the pain is better than no feeling. Thanks for your lovely comment.
❤️k
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Re. I can feel it
3rd Dec 2024 11:27am
That last line really brings it home Red.
You really are a poet and a great songwriter and vocalist 💖
You do so many things well !
Keep bringing it
BIG IMPRESSED
You really are a poet and a great songwriter and vocalist 💖
You do so many things well !
Keep bringing it
BIG IMPRESSED
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5th Dec 2024 00:38am
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5th Dec 2024 00:39am
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5th Dec 2024 00:39am
Re. I can feel it
7th Dec 2024 6:32pm
This is one of those that we find relatable and unique, that familiar feeling, we're excited and yet scared at the same, if that makes sense.
Glad you found it and shared.
Glad you found it and shared.
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Re: Re. I can feel it
8th Dec 2024 1:37am
"Excited and yet scared" makes total sense to me. I think those are my absolute favourite moments in life.
Thanks
❤️k
Thanks
❤️k
Re. I can feel it
Today 1:04pm
"We poets are sensitive souls" someone once said. It's so true and it's very hard to feel intensily, feel everything, and you conveyed that beautiful in this stunning piece of yours.
"To feel the love
is to know the hurt" > can't love these lines enough 💕
"To feel the love
is to know the hurt" > can't love these lines enough 💕
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Re: Re. I can feel it
Today 7:33pm
We are sensitive. And I think the world needs more sensitive souls!
Thank you for reading and your kind feedback!
❤️k
Thank you for reading and your kind feedback!
❤️k