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Acclaim
Learn from every lesson
Overcome your fears
Life's a daily blessing
Wipe away those tears
Face the lonely silence
Puff your chest, be bold
Show them your defiance
Express your best, bestowed
Claim the brightest flame
Trust in you, forsee
Rise to the acclaim
Faith's eternal key
Overcome your fears
Life's a daily blessing
Wipe away those tears
Face the lonely silence
Puff your chest, be bold
Show them your defiance
Express your best, bestowed
Claim the brightest flame
Trust in you, forsee
Rise to the acclaim
Faith's eternal key
Published 29th Nov 2024
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Anonymous
29th Nov 2024 10:38am
I really like this, Pete
Your rhyming is always on point.
Your rhyming is always on point.
29th Nov 2024 10:58am
29th Nov 2024 6:02pm
It has a really nice flow, and it made me smile because I struggle a lot with trusting myself. But it is true, the only thing we can do is learn from failure and success alike.
29th Nov 2024 8:13pm
30th Nov 2024 3:20am
I like the positive spin here, Pete. Sometimes we need to remind ourselves that life isn't always bad, especially when we're feeling low.
30th Nov 2024 12:25pm
30th Nov 2024 4:00am
Brilliantly written, Pete. Into the list it belongs. This message was so uplifting my brother. Excellent execution. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
30th Nov 2024 12:25pm
30th Nov 2024 2:23pm
Pete the flow is beautiful. the message and picture go beautifully together.
30th Nov 2024 3:02pm
Yesterday 1:44am
Ohh, I love the rhythm and message in this!
Impowering and invigorating amigo.
It's got swag!
Impowering and invigorating amigo.
It's got swag!
Yesterday 11:30am
Yesterday 4:05pm
I'm going to need to revisit this one when my spirit candle runs low. A profoundly empowering piece
Yesterday 9:02pm
