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Poor wounded Soul
Poor wounded Soul,
trying to survive
Life's Trauma,
from one powerful blow.
All that your soul needs,
is to feel at ease,
careless and free,
just feel the nice breeze,
sit back and relax and
Have no worries.
Let go of it All,
The Pain, suffering,
worrying, and sorrow,
Leave yesterday behind,
push forward to tomorrow.
This agony that you endure
won't Last long,
So try to be strong,
it is only a test,
REMEMBER:
WHO'S ON YOUR SIDE, and
In this JUST REST!!!!!
B.R.
Date: 11/23/2024
trying to survive
Life's Trauma,
from one powerful blow.
All that your soul needs,
is to feel at ease,
careless and free,
just feel the nice breeze,
sit back and relax and
Have no worries.
Let go of it All,
The Pain, suffering,
worrying, and sorrow,
Leave yesterday behind,
push forward to tomorrow.
This agony that you endure
won't Last long,
So try to be strong,
it is only a test,
REMEMBER:
WHO'S ON YOUR SIDE, and
In this JUST REST!!!!!
B.R.
Date: 11/23/2024
Published 26th Nov 2024
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26th Nov 2024 9:28pm
I can relate to this message as I'm still here and still standing and fighting, for life with the closeness of God Almighty by myside, along with strength and courage and perseverance with my family and friends and my wife 💕 🪬 SHAMAN 🪬
27th Nov 2024 3:12am
I really enjoyed this poem. I especially liked how you made the point that in life crap does happen, but it's what you make of it that matters. The bad stuff isn't going away, but it also isn't permanent.
Very well written poem- Thank you!
Very well written poem- Thank you!
