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Mary
Written by
Ahavati
(Tams)
Published 24th Nov 2024
Author's Note
This is a part of a Visual Expression Series I am writing dedicated to DU Authors. It was inspired by the Memorial competition I am hosting. This one is dedicated to Her.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Re. Mary
24th Nov 2024 1:16pm
You have Mary - Her - to a T. I am sure she will be greatly encouraged by your assessment of her journey with us.
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29th Nov 2024 11:57am
Re. Mary
24th Nov 2024 1:41pm
this is beautiful lovely Ahavati Mary certainly inspires me with her willingness to share her past and by telling us what she is doing to overcome that type of thinking she is remarable ❤️
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Re: Re. Mary
24th Nov 2024 4:17pm
Thank you so much, Brenda💕
Your indomitable and beautiful spirit inspires me every day.
Your indomitable and beautiful spirit inspires me every day.
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Re: Re. Mary
29th Nov 2024 11:58am
Re. Mary
Thank you, Ahavati❤️
I don’t quite know what to say…
I’m very grateful for your support and the support of other DUP friends and the poetesses/poets who allow me the space and grace to be myself. I wouldn’t be here today, learning how to thrive, if it weren’t for all of you.
I’m fresh out of RL space. I’ll be back to add this, lol!
I’m back.
On my RL now and in my memory for a very long time.
I don’t quite know what to say…
I’m very grateful for your support and the support of other DUP friends and the poetesses/poets who allow me the space and grace to be myself. I wouldn’t be here today, learning how to thrive, if it weren’t for all of you.
I’m fresh out of RL space. I’ll be back to add this, lol!
I’m back.
On my RL now and in my memory for a very long time.
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Re: Re. Mary
24th Nov 2024 6:13pm
Re. Mary
24th Nov 2024 5:52pm
Re. Mary
24th Nov 2024 6:28pm
The combination of words and image works well, forming an integral piece. The reflective symmetry being broken by the female figure and bird, embodies the poem.
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Re: Re. Mary
29th Nov 2024 11:59am
Hey SeaCat! Thanks so much for the observations! I really appreciate them. I felt the image reflected ( no pun intended ) her as well.
Re. Mary
24th Nov 2024 7:16pm
I keep telling her she's a force of nature. Fierce & beautiful in spirit. Beautiful tribute to Mary 😊
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29th Nov 2024 11:59am
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25th Nov 2024 7:08am
Re: Re. Mary
29th Nov 2024 12:00pm
Thanks, Michael! We don't voice how we feel about others enough while they're still with us. I thought it was time. xo
Re. Mary
26th Nov 2024 1:26pm
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29th Nov 2024 12:00pm
Re. Mary
27th Nov 2024 6:31am
Dear A,
Brava. A beautiful write of so worthy a poet. She’s fearless in her dedication and so encouraging to us all. Lovely write. H🌷
Brava. A beautiful write of so worthy a poet. She’s fearless in her dedication and so encouraging to us all. Lovely write. H🌷
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Re: Re. Mary
29th Nov 2024 12:01pm
Thanks, Honoria! You are absolutely correct! I appreciate your observations. xo
Re. Mary
29th Nov 2024 4:50am
Beautifully written, Tams. Such a lovely tribute. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
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29th Nov 2024 12:01pm
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5th Dec 2024 5:43am
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