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What is Grief
Grief is when you start to not care
not see the bright among the grey
when the door closes and stay shut
no feelings just the need to cut
Grief is when you choke on your words
your throat close up and shut out air
pain in your joints sharply going inward
you wait for nothing stillness everywhere
so what is grief
grief is when you lose yourself in losing someone
losing your thoughts in what might have been
jumping into a pinhole get buried without a marker
Grief just is.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=19IPK4uB18E
not see the bright among the grey
when the door closes and stay shut
no feelings just the need to cut
Grief is when you choke on your words
your throat close up and shut out air
pain in your joints sharply going inward
you wait for nothing stillness everywhere
so what is grief
grief is when you lose yourself in losing someone
losing your thoughts in what might have been
jumping into a pinhole get buried without a marker
Grief just is.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=19IPK4uB18E
Published 19th Nov 2024
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19th Nov 2024 3:17pm
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19th Nov 2024 3:20pm
"Starting to not care.. choking on your words.. losing yourself.. your thoughts".. just stopping to be vibrant with a fulfilling life of bonds and meaning! So much beauty and depth in your rendition of your perception of grief.. a pleasure reading you dear Grace. Stay always blessed.
19th Nov 2024 3:28pm
Dear Besma, you are always very kind in your comments. Yes grief can be a multitude of feelings and always on the border of regrets, anger and disappointment. But life goes on and we learn to cope.:) thank you so much for reading me.
