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In the Glass
Temptation breakdown
Warmth melts from rock-sold ice cube
Diluted disillusion
Warmth melts from rock-sold ice cube
Diluted disillusion
Written by
fianaturie8
(Fia Naturie)
Published 6th Nov 2024
Author's Note
This is for the Beer or Alcohol Senryu/Haiku competition
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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6th Nov 2024 12:03pm
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6th Nov 2024 1:44pm
Oh, this is a good one.
Love: "Diluted disillusion"
>made me think: delirium 😂
Good luck in the comp :-)
Love: "Diluted disillusion"
>made me think: delirium 😂
Good luck in the comp :-)
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7th Nov 2024 6:23am
Cleverly written, Fia. Good luck in the competition. Appreciate you.
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