deepundergroundpoetry.com
Hellbound
Hellbound, pyre, descending, falling
Hollow souls, shadows call on
Incomplete, darkness marches
Glutton feeds, silent, charges
Mirror shards, dissect in shame
Symbols pour, acid rain
No rebound, from this hold
Tears drown on sins untold
Hollow souls, shadows call on
Incomplete, darkness marches
Glutton feeds, silent, charges
Mirror shards, dissect in shame
Symbols pour, acid rain
No rebound, from this hold
Tears drown on sins untold
Published 23rd Oct 2024
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 9
reading list entries 0
comments 18
reads 150
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
23rd Oct 2024 9:04am
23rd Oct 2024 9:17am
23rd Oct 2024 9:22am
This certainly has a dark vibe, which I love.
...i especially dig that first stanza...
...i especially dig that first stanza...
23rd Oct 2024 9:28am
23rd Oct 2024 10:19am
23rd Oct 2024 10:38am
23rd Oct 2024 4:21pm
Nice piece u have here, very spooky and edgy 👍🏻
Thanks for sharing Pete 🎃
Jackie ☺️
Thanks for sharing Pete 🎃
Jackie ☺️
23rd Oct 2024 6:25pm
23rd Oct 2024 5:15pm
Diggin the shadowy feel to this vibe, Pete
It gives me shades of Dante's Inferno...
Much respect
Naaj
It gives me shades of Dante's Inferno...
Much respect
Naaj
23rd Oct 2024 6:26pm
23rd Oct 2024 8:49pm
23rd Oct 2024 11:02pm
23rd Oct 2024 10:16pm
23rd Oct 2024 11:03pm
24th Oct 2024 2:22am
24th Oct 2024 12:12pm
24th Oct 2024 9:36pm
25th Oct 2024 2:46am
