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Hellbound
Hellbound, pyre, descending, falling
Hollow souls, shadows call on
Incomplete, darkness marches
Glutton feeds, silent, charges
Mirror shards, dissect in shame
Symbols pour, acid rain
No rebound, from this hold
Tears drown on sins untold
Hollow souls, shadows call on
Incomplete, darkness marches
Glutton feeds, silent, charges
Mirror shards, dissect in shame
Symbols pour, acid rain
No rebound, from this hold
Tears drown on sins untold
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Re. Hellbound
23rd Oct 2024 9:04am
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23rd Oct 2024 9:17am
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23rd Oct 2024 9:22am
This certainly has a dark vibe, which I love.
...i especially dig that first stanza...
...i especially dig that first stanza...
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23rd Oct 2024 9:28am
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23rd Oct 2024 4:21pm
Nice piece u have here, very spooky and edgy 👍🏻
Thanks for sharing Pete 🎃
Jackie ☺️
Thanks for sharing Pete 🎃
Jackie ☺️
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23rd Oct 2024 6:25pm
Re. Hellbound
23rd Oct 2024 5:15pm
Diggin the shadowy feel to this vibe, Pete
It gives me shades of Dante's Inferno...
Much respect
Naaj
It gives me shades of Dante's Inferno...
Much respect
Naaj
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