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Where The Tracks Diverge
I want to buy a ticket for a train,
to go back in time when my children were small… when hugs meant everything,
when scraped knees could be kissed away, and they looked for me in the crowd,
always knowing I’d be there.
I long to hear the soft patter of their
feet on the floor,
to feel the weight of their small
hands clutching mine,
before the world taught them to stand taller, and lean on me less.
But somewhere along the way,
the world called to them louder than my voice could, and the hands that once reached for me became fists of defiance.
I want to board a train with no return,
to ride through the days when they still needed me, before the tracks diverged,
before I lost them to stations I can’t reach.
to go back in time when my children were small… when hugs meant everything,
when scraped knees could be kissed away, and they looked for me in the crowd,
always knowing I’d be there.
I long to hear the soft patter of their
feet on the floor,
to feel the weight of their small
hands clutching mine,
before the world taught them to stand taller, and lean on me less.
But somewhere along the way,
the world called to them louder than my voice could, and the hands that once reached for me became fists of defiance.
I want to board a train with no return,
to ride through the days when they still needed me, before the tracks diverged,
before I lost them to stations I can’t reach.
Author's Note
I miss my children.
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17th Oct 2024 00:20am
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17th Oct 2024 2:39am
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17th Oct 2024 2:39am
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17th Oct 2024 2:55am
Beautiful write, Shiloh. Once you become a parent you never stop being one, no matter how old they get. My mother told me that when I was a teenager and still does to present day. I never understood it completely till I became a parent. Thanks for sharing. Appreciate you.
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17th Oct 2024 3:06am
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17th Oct 2024 10:08am
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17th Oct 2024 10:25am
You've still got your children. They will always come to you when they need you... you'll be surprised! You will always be there for them to lean on when others could not. It's an unbreakable bond which sometimes seems hidden but in times of real dependency, it's always there. I wrote something along your lines, called, 'These Days That Have Gone.' I can't wait to share it with you one day. 😊
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17th Oct 2024 10:32am
Hey, Billy. I would love for you to share it with me. I'd be honored, for sure.
My children....well, it's been seven years since I've heard from one and almost three for another. I won't give up hope and I pray for them everyday. There's nothing I wouldn't do for any of them. I'll always be waiting for any contact.
Thank you so much for your kind comment 😊.
My children....well, it's been seven years since I've heard from one and almost three for another. I won't give up hope and I pray for them everyday. There's nothing I wouldn't do for any of them. I'll always be waiting for any contact.
Thank you so much for your kind comment 😊.
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17th Oct 2024 10:35am
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17th Oct 2024 10:43am
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I've got 4 Shiloh, all teens now, time just goes nowhere... I particularly miss the Christmas toy stores walking through each aisle and seeing there eyes light up but sadly no more of that but at the same time, it's a joy to see them growing ❤️
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17th Oct 2024 10:37am