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Autumn's Embrace
Because we are poets
We feel so much
Fall's sudden brisk temperature
Releasing us from summer's hold
Sudden rummaging through draws
Finding sweaters long tucked away
Sleep has been better
Morning's crisp and dog walking faster
I covered you up
Blanket askew
You lay exposed to my hungry eyes
Morning desire to have and to hold....
We feel so much
Fall's sudden brisk temperature
Releasing us from summer's hold
Sudden rummaging through draws
Finding sweaters long tucked away
Sleep has been better
Morning's crisp and dog walking faster
I covered you up
Blanket askew
You lay exposed to my hungry eyes
Morning desire to have and to hold....
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Painting by Poetspeak
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Re. Autumn's Embrace
16th Oct 2024 1:26pm
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16th Oct 2024 2:05pm
Poetry is often about the tie up at the end...
Guess that could be interpreted many ways depending on the person...
Thanks BIG O !
Guess that could be interpreted many ways depending on the person...
Thanks BIG O !
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16th Oct 2024 2:20pm
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16th Oct 2024 1:52pm
Nicely Done 👍 that feeling of the changes of the season when the leaves blowing in the wind blowing with a southern breeze which is priceless 😁👍💪💯🪬 SHAMAN 🪬
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16th Oct 2024 2:08pm
It's often sudden in autumn.
One minute still sweating on a warm full day, next minute shivering...
I'm glad to Iive where there are seasons though...
Thanks Stoney ✋
One minute still sweating on a warm full day, next minute shivering...
I'm glad to Iive where there are seasons though...
Thanks Stoney ✋
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16th Oct 2024 2:12pm
Respect Brother Poet ✍️ sometimes I wonder what would it be like without the changes of the seasonal transaction 😕😔🪬 SHAMAN 🪬
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Re. Autumn's Embrace
16th Oct 2024 1:55pm
There's literally nothing I don't love about this...from artwork to verses. I'm holding on to this one
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It came to me this morning while walking my dog. She often has a skip in her step but the last few days she's been downright cheerful...
Thanks Willow !!
Appreciate the RL !
Thanks Willow !!
Appreciate the RL !
Re. Autumn's Embrace
16th Oct 2024 2:12pm
lovely words and beautiful drawing ....so soothing to eyes
is it crayons oil pastels?
is it crayons oil pastels?
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16th Oct 2024 2:21pm
This is unusual but I don't recall exactly how I did this painting. If I had to guess I'd say it was watercolor pens and some other kind of blending. I'm always trying out new techniques and often use watercolor, gouache and lately oil pastels. That's the great thing about abstraction... anything goes.
The words I took out of my desk drawer and rearranged them .. humor ......
Many thanks ID !
The words I took out of my desk drawer and rearranged them .. humor ......
Many thanks ID !
Re. Autumn's Embrace
16th Oct 2024 2:40pm
This does look like a soft fall morning. To me it still has hints of summer though, almost like you don’t want to let go. Maybe that’s why your last stanza is so sweet.
Just my interpretation.
I totally dig this. How could I not? It’s PS style.
Just my interpretation.
I totally dig this. How could I not? It’s PS style.
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16th Oct 2024 3:03pm
Yes, you're right Mary
Prefer 60's and 70's Temps so a little wistful when the real feel was in the 30's this morning ...
We all have a style. Often I think my writing is a little clunky but this one did have a good feel. Dang thing wrote itself.
I shouldn't complain about weather to you.
Not sure how your survive all that snow ...
Thx on this entry
Prefer 60's and 70's Temps so a little wistful when the real feel was in the 30's this morning ...
We all have a style. Often I think my writing is a little clunky but this one did have a good feel. Dang thing wrote itself.
I shouldn't complain about weather to you.
Not sure how your survive all that snow ...
Thx on this entry
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16th Oct 2024 3:18pm
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Re: Re. Autumn's Embrace
16th Oct 2024 5:32pm
I like the cold too.
Just have to get used to it ..
The painting does have a feel.
I can’t remember how I got that effect.
I did it about a year ago ..
Thx S !
Just have to get used to it ..
The painting does have a feel.
I can’t remember how I got that effect.
I did it about a year ago ..
Thx S !
Re. Autumn's Embrace
17th Oct 2024 00:37am
Lovely colour choices.
It's so beautiful here this time of year. Another week or two and all the leaves will be gone, and we'll be into the gray season... melancholy galore.
Give the doggy a scritch from me!
❤️k
It's so beautiful here this time of year. Another week or two and all the leaves will be gone, and we'll be into the gray season... melancholy galore.
Give the doggy a scritch from me!
❤️k
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17th Oct 2024 1:23am
Enjoy it babe
The gray zone takes a lot of hooch to get through ...
Onyx is doing well. Ever since I changed her food and got her off the expensive science diet, she's much happier and peppier ..
Crazy
Thx on the art and stuff ..
The gray zone takes a lot of hooch to get through ...
Onyx is doing well. Ever since I changed her food and got her off the expensive science diet, she's much happier and peppier ..
Crazy
Thx on the art and stuff ..
Re. Autumn's Embrace
19th Oct 2024 9:49pm
Love the change in weather, the crisp cool air in the mornings.
Killer last line.
Great work.
Killer last line.
Great work.
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19th Oct 2024 11:48pm
Re. Autumn's Embrace
24th Oct 2024 1:24am
I wish we had four seasons down here! But luckily there's your brisk write to cool the air .
Thank you for that! I've always said that it's easier to warm up on a cold morning than it is to cool off on a hot day. Why why do I stay in this God forsaken weather!
Thanks for the awesome display of chill, fine sir!
Thank you for that! I've always said that it's easier to warm up on a cold morning than it is to cool off on a hot day. Why why do I stay in this God forsaken weather!
Thanks for the awesome display of chill, fine sir!
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I love autumn.
Something so organic about the change of seasons. Though it's still pretty warm up north. Yo yo's between 75 and 40 ....weird science.
Gonna try and get down to South Florida this winter for a spell. Been since before the pandemic, I'm ready to reintroduce myself.
Maybe I'll run into you at the Miscue Lounge ...
Thx Mark
Something so organic about the change of seasons. Though it's still pretty warm up north. Yo yo's between 75 and 40 ....weird science.
Gonna try and get down to South Florida this winter for a spell. Been since before the pandemic, I'm ready to reintroduce myself.
Maybe I'll run into you at the Miscue Lounge ...
Thx Mark
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24th Oct 2024 2:10am
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24th Oct 2024 2:51am