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WHEN SUCKING ENDS

AS
I enjoy
and taste
every drop,
as the sweetness
fills my mouth;
the craving for
more grows stronger;
THEN
the last drop
enters my mouth,
the sweetness is gone
but I'm still craving more;
one more drop...please!
WHEN
the sucking ends
I remove the
straw from my mouth
and savor the last taste
of my strawberry shake.
Come to think of it,
I think I'll order
a chocolate shake
and keep sucking.
Care to join me?
Written by TheOralizer
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