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My Snowflake Lover
This is something that was not planned
The moment you stood there and took my hand
I recall it well...
T'was the day the first snow fell
I was trembling inside, you see
I wasn't sure you were willing to be
With me on these cold winter nights
As I made love to you in the firelight
We both have a few years on us yet
Romance will never die with us, pet
You're so cute in the spring, such full of heart
Does your flavor then shift from sweet to tart?
You laugh and play as you allow me in
When it shows, you come out, like it's cinnamon
You tell me to breathe and not to go fast
Winter has come and we want this to last!
Kissing your lips is like coming home
Tender and sweet is all you have shown
I will be the man for these frosty nights
And take you again to the highest height
Oh when the snow melts...
Don't shy away from my snowflake of glass
That's fragile and tender but I promise will last
I am a gentleman willing to learn
As you're slowly undone... my fire will burn!
The moment you stood there and took my hand
I recall it well...
T'was the day the first snow fell
I was trembling inside, you see
I wasn't sure you were willing to be
With me on these cold winter nights
As I made love to you in the firelight
We both have a few years on us yet
Romance will never die with us, pet
You're so cute in the spring, such full of heart
Does your flavor then shift from sweet to tart?
You laugh and play as you allow me in
When it shows, you come out, like it's cinnamon
You tell me to breathe and not to go fast
Winter has come and we want this to last!
Kissing your lips is like coming home
Tender and sweet is all you have shown
I will be the man for these frosty nights
And take you again to the highest height
Oh when the snow melts...
Don't shy away from my snowflake of glass
That's fragile and tender but I promise will last
I am a gentleman willing to learn
As you're slowly undone... my fire will burn!
Written by
fianaturie8
(Fia Naturie)
Published 20th Sep 2024
| Edited 25th Sep 2024
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20th Sep 2024 7:50pm
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20th Sep 2024 10:20pm
This is impressive. Something to keep us warm throughout winter. Strong write, love it! 😊
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20th Sep 2024 10:22pm
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21st Sep 2024 2:28am
Great write, Fia. You're definitely a lady who knows what she wants. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
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21st Sep 2024 2:36am
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21st Sep 2024 8:55am
"Kissing your lips is like coming home" > beautifully said and so very true.
Amazing piece, dear Fia 💕
Amazing piece, dear Fia 💕
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21st Sep 2024 11:42am
It's a slow burn! Excellent poem! Great applications of rhyme with tempo!
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21st Sep 2024 11:01pm
I loved all of the rhyming in this!
Felt really good to read and made
me smile all the way to the end- so thank you:)
Felt really good to read and made
me smile all the way to the end- so thank you:)
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Anonymous
22nd Sep 2024 4:14pm
Your skill for rhyming is always evident in your poems. Great writing, Fia.
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