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Tidal Thoughts
life dragging its feet
want a shroud for a sheet
every dark notion
devoid of emotion
reached my limit of use
hanging around is just abuse
everything crashes
leaving nothing but ashes
in this silence
touched by its violence
shrieking voices
ever shrinking choices
overwhelming exposure
keeps me feeling unsure
no holding back the tide
or these thoughts of suicide
want a shroud for a sheet
every dark notion
devoid of emotion
reached my limit of use
hanging around is just abuse
everything crashes
leaving nothing but ashes
in this silence
touched by its violence
shrieking voices
ever shrinking choices
overwhelming exposure
keeps me feeling unsure
no holding back the tide
or these thoughts of suicide
Published 13th Sep 2024
Author's Note
wrote this in january when i was a guest of a Memtal Hospital
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13th Sep 2024 9:25pm
Powerful... so glad you made it through the other side... you still have too much poetry left to write...
14th Sep 2024 3:34pm
had a.few people fragging me yhrough funny how you yhonk your alone and find onyje farkest time your not.
