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i kissed her

she removed
her
deniability
just for
a moment,
and i
wanted to
kiss her.

Written by goodwolf1966

(jimmy)

Published 11th Sep 2024

#admiration #courage #hope #kindness #strength

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fianaturie8 (Fia Naturie)

11th Sep 2024 4:41pm

First off perfect title caught my eye immediately. The poem itself is engaging. Fia xoxo

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goodwolf1966 (jimmy)

11th Sep 2024 5:46pm

thank you Fia for the comment and RL add.

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crimsin (Unveiling)

11th Sep 2024 4:54pm

good morning I really I could relate to the sentiment it's beautiful💕

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goodwolf1966 (jimmy)

11th Sep 2024 5:46pm

thank you crimsin

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Honoria

12th Sep 2024 3:35am

Dear J,

Very very sweet. H🌷

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goodwolf1966 (jimmy)

12th Sep 2024 3:36am

thank you Honoria

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DamianDeadLove (Damian DeadLove)

12th Sep 2024 4:21am

Beautiful write, Jimmy. Appreciate you.

DL

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goodwolf1966 (jimmy)

12th Sep 2024 4:43am

thank you Damian

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