Ashes Out To Sea

Dear SW,

The return to earth, or water in this case, seems the ultimate circle. The final freedom. I like how you’ve rhymed the last word of each line. Great flow. H🌷

H

Thank you ❤️

SW 🌻

H,

What are your thoughts on the ward jar vs urn. I recently pondered the two.

For me as the poem states : " there's no rest for me".  Portraying the feeling of darkness and confinement and the coldness of just a jar. Wanting to be free from entrapment.

Vs

An urn, which many relate to as a holding place for a loved one. Still being confined to a space but most of them are beautiful and we don't think of them being a place of no rest.

If I'm overthinking this please let me know 🙃

SW 🌻

I think jar works better. It speaks to coldness of the container. While urn has its place I always see that word as “urine” which I know it isn’t but my mind twists it and it takes up valuable head room.  
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H🌷

H

Thank you so much! I will leave it as is!

Resonated with me being an ocean lover too ❤️

P

I'm happy to hear that 😊

SW 🌻