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Take Two!

You call that sucking dick, you stupid cow?!
That's supposed to get my rocks off?
Are you fucking kidding me?
What kind of goddamn suck is that?
What the fuck are you trying to do, blow up a fucking balloon?
You're a stupid bitch, you couldn't suck a cock if your fucked up life depended on it.
What the fuck are you looking at?
Oh shit, are you going to start crying?
Oh gee, that breaks my fucking heart.
You better shut-up, or I'll give you something to cry about.
Now what are you doing?
Are you getting frigid on me?
Of all the fucking luck.
Of all the sluts out there in the world, I end up with one that's so fucked up, she can't even suck a goddamn dick!!

CUT!! OK!

That was great but this time with more feeling. Baby, you should cry more at the beginning of his dialog. Don't wait for him to call you a stupid bitch before you let the tears flow. You're doing great though, real passion. I can feel it!!

OK EVERYBODY, BACK TO ONE!!

Let's get the lights up.
Time is money!!