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Not like the Roses
And I, I'm not like
the roses
and I never had a lot
of choices
And he, he smelled like
the rain
and in one night he
became everything
I was born in the mud and
everyone noticed on the
other side of town
but he called me up
anyhow
came to my work and
took me out
Showed me how to
plant a kiss in the dark
by the ice skating rink
inside Bryant Park
And I felt like
impossible magic
closed my eyes
absorbing all of it
and he, he tasted like
the rain
flooding all of my senses
of pain
letting go of traumatic memories
while my mind unfolded
like enchanted origami
floating above water
Never mind the anchor
called my life
Never mind the muck
On my back
It’ll remind me
Where I thrive
No need to reach for the sky
we have each other
No need for switchblade stems
No one needs to suffer
No, we're not like the Roses
we're reborn like magic
all we need to do is focus
so keep your blood
and watch them notice
how you've reinvented yourself
and turned into a Lotus
the roses
and I never had a lot
of choices
And he, he smelled like
the rain
and in one night he
became everything
I was born in the mud and
everyone noticed on the
other side of town
but he called me up
anyhow
came to my work and
took me out
Showed me how to
plant a kiss in the dark
by the ice skating rink
inside Bryant Park
And I felt like
impossible magic
closed my eyes
absorbing all of it
and he, he tasted like
the rain
flooding all of my senses
of pain
letting go of traumatic memories
while my mind unfolded
like enchanted origami
floating above water
Never mind the anchor
called my life
Never mind the muck
On my back
It’ll remind me
Where I thrive
No need to reach for the sky
we have each other
No need for switchblade stems
No one needs to suffer
No, we're not like the Roses
we're reborn like magic
all we need to do is focus
so keep your blood
and watch them notice
how you've reinvented yourself
and turned into a Lotus
Author's Note
I wrote this and it came across to me as a song and a story.
It was so vivid - I had to write it down.
Hope you enjoy:)
Wrote to while listening to
Glare - Do Not Enter
https://youtu.be/gm8vfUA81fk
It was so vivid - I had to write it down.
Hope you enjoy:)
Wrote to while listening to
Glare - Do Not Enter
https://youtu.be/gm8vfUA81fk
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Re. Not like the Roses
7th Sep 2024 3:13am
Beautifully written, Adelphina. Into the list it belongs. Such a touching write. Appreciate you.
DL
DL
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Re: Re. Not like the Roses
7th Sep 2024 3:19am
Re. Not like the Roses
7th Sep 2024 3:48am
Yes a you lady from the wrong side of the tracks that life has beaten down. To find her prince charming and share that special moment in the rain or on the tracks in the dark, could be as close to heaven they ever get. Really tight write Lady
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Re: Re. Not like the Roses
Hey there Meme!
thank you, thank you!!
I'm from the wrong side of everything.
I've avoided being shot, jumped and all kinds of ugly.
Life is good and filled with impossible magic buddy!
Best believe that. hahaha
Thanks for stopping by amigo!
thank you, thank you!!
I'm from the wrong side of everything.
I've avoided being shot, jumped and all kinds of ugly.
Life is good and filled with impossible magic buddy!
Best believe that. hahaha
Thanks for stopping by amigo!
Re. Not like the Roses
7th Sep 2024 4:27am
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8th Sep 2024 4:42pm
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14th Sep 2024 3:39am
Re. Not like the Roses
7th Sep 2024 5:01am
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8th Sep 2024 4:50pm
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Re: Re. Not like the Roses
8th Sep 2024 4:57pm
Isn't it:)
I totally agree.
Best feeling ever.
thanks for stopping by and the RL!
I totally agree.
Best feeling ever.
thanks for stopping by and the RL!
Re. Not like the Roses
7th Sep 2024 10:18am
Superbly crafted, I get some of my ideas listening to a song for inspiration 🙃
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Re: Re. Not like the Roses
8th Sep 2024 4:59pm
Hi Pete,
For me music brings images and stories. So I close my eyes
and live in loop for a minute:)
thanks for the comment and stopping by.
glad you enjoyed!
For me music brings images and stories. So I close my eyes
and live in loop for a minute:)
thanks for the comment and stopping by.
glad you enjoyed!
Re. Not like the Roses
7th Sep 2024 2:41pm
Wonderful, Adelphina! The Lotus is one of my favorite flowers not because it's considered exotic, but because it rises above the muddy sediment of its birth.
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Re: Re. Not like the Roses
8th Sep 2024 5:05pm
Hi Tams,
You know my best friend has 7 sisters. 5 of them went together and got matching lotus tattoos on their arms. They were raised in extreme poverty and rose above it. It's why I chose the lotus for this write:)
And thanks for stopping by and the RL:)
It's appreciated
You know my best friend has 7 sisters. 5 of them went together and got matching lotus tattoos on their arms. They were raised in extreme poverty and rose above it. It's why I chose the lotus for this write:)
And thanks for stopping by and the RL:)
It's appreciated
Re. Not like the Roses
7th Sep 2024 7:59pm
Hello Adelphina, how are you... this is beautiful, and very well written... take good care
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Re: Re. Not like the Roses
8th Sep 2024 5:07pm
Hey there wolf!
Thank you for saying that. I appreciate it.
You take good care too and don't be a stranger:)
Thank you for saying that. I appreciate it.
You take good care too and don't be a stranger:)
Re. Not like the Roses
Anonymous
8th Sep 2024 2:07pm
The profundity in this leaves one...speechless

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Re: Re. Not like the Roses
8th Sep 2024 5:09pm
Hi Con,
I love this comment!!
Mainly because I made ya feel something:)
It's perfect:)
thanks for the RL and stopping by!
I love this comment!!
Mainly because I made ya feel something:)
It's perfect:)
thanks for the RL and stopping by!
Re. Not like the Roses
9th Sep 2024 1:31am
When two people meet, and get to know each other, that's when their life together begins. There are three books to our lives. Two are the each of us prior, and then the third is full of blank pages for us to fill together. It's not really a different story, it's a redirection.
Writing was our paper planes to each other. Until we started using real planes...
And we don't have to be perfect people with impeccable pasts, to have a future full of bliss.
We steer away from darkness, towards what brings us light. That is ultimately what we feed on, as human beings with needs.
You have so many awesome traits. But your best one is your natural enthusiasm. It's so addictive. You're my box of puppies!
And, your write; It's wondrous how you visualize things. You're like a literary seamstress.
I get it, obviously. Keep your creative side going, no matter what. Or I will ground you to your room!
Wonderful write, my lovely loverly love.
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Re: Re. Not like the Roses
I'm so ready for that third book.
It's kinda already started.
I wonder what will happen on the next chapter
coming up later this month. Hummmm
And what will I title the chapter - I love a good title:)
We met on paper planes baby. Yeah?
Your slow burn is addictive too Mr. Stoic. I like
rattling that brain of yours and making it laugh -
that is music. And your three sneezes!! It's almost
like the 3 books scenario. LOL
So cute!!
I'm in a unique place in my writing with you.
Adding you to my writing chemistry - it's new and
exhilarating so I'm letting my mind mix things up.
See what I come up with - but you are always in it.
shaking things up!
Love you sweetie:)
and don't sweat the RL!!
.
It's kinda already started.
I wonder what will happen on the next chapter
coming up later this month. Hummmm
And what will I title the chapter - I love a good title:)
We met on paper planes baby. Yeah?
Your slow burn is addictive too Mr. Stoic. I like
rattling that brain of yours and making it laugh -
that is music. And your three sneezes!! It's almost
like the 3 books scenario. LOL
So cute!!
I'm in a unique place in my writing with you.
Adding you to my writing chemistry - it's new and
exhilarating so I'm letting my mind mix things up.
See what I come up with - but you are always in it.
shaking things up!
Love you sweetie:)
and don't sweat the RL!!
.
Re. Not like the Roses
9th Sep 2024 6:12am
Dear A,
I liked how this made me feel powerful. I could rise above all the shit. Flower power and love all the way. I’m also a bit envious that you listen to music and get these inspirations. I get nothin’ 😏 half the time I can’t even decipher the words of a song. Where’s the diction?🤷🏻♀️
Beauty of a write. H🌷
I liked how this made me feel powerful. I could rise above all the shit. Flower power and love all the way. I’m also a bit envious that you listen to music and get these inspirations. I get nothin’ 😏 half the time I can’t even decipher the words of a song. Where’s the diction?🤷🏻♀️
Beauty of a write. H🌷
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Re: Re. Not like the Roses
Hi H!
You are powerful. You can rise above shit, bullshit, any kind of shit. I promise. Leave the judgmental looks and up turned noses whether in life or love. Let it feed you in a way.
You are the CEO of your life, and you can fire people.
Let the heads roll amiga:)
I know that sounds brutal, but
we need to get shit done! hahahah
Hire better qualified listeners,
lovers, - whatever you need.
See what you did, you got me all amped up!
I love it - and you:)
thanks for stopping by and the RL
You are one of the diamonds here chica:)
You are powerful. You can rise above shit, bullshit, any kind of shit. I promise. Leave the judgmental looks and up turned noses whether in life or love. Let it feed you in a way.
You are the CEO of your life, and you can fire people.
Let the heads roll amiga:)
I know that sounds brutal, but
we need to get shit done! hahahah
Hire better qualified listeners,
lovers, - whatever you need.
See what you did, you got me all amped up!
I love it - and you:)
thanks for stopping by and the RL
You are one of the diamonds here chica:)
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9th Sep 2024 11:13pm
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Re: Re. Not like the Roses
10th Sep 2024 2:55am
Hi ML
Thank you. I did a little edit. I put me instead of your on my
anchor stanza. Wasn't sure if I wrote that right so I changed it.
Sometimes the spill gets confused in transition from brain
to paper:)
I'm glad you enjoyed the
read and thanks for stopping by!
Thank you. I did a little edit. I put me instead of your on my
anchor stanza. Wasn't sure if I wrote that right so I changed it.
Sometimes the spill gets confused in transition from brain
to paper:)
I'm glad you enjoyed the
read and thanks for stopping by!
Re. Not like the Roses
11th Sep 2024 1:48pm
This is probably one of the most beautiful love poems I've ever read, if not the most beautiful one. Those last two lines are simply stunning! Also: thank you for introducing us (me) to Glare, what an amazing band.
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Re: Re. Not like the Roses
14th Sep 2024 4:51pm
Aww, thank you for this awesome comment!
You made my whole year with it. I'm not on DUP as
much as I'd like so I'm sorry it took me so long to reply.
The lotus plant has so history to it. I wanted to write
about it in this time and how it can still be inspiring,
no matter where you come from.
thanks for checking this out and the RL!
My son went to hear Glare live and came home
and played me a clip he recorded. He came
in around 11 o'clock at night. I stayed up until
1:30 a.m. and finished this write.
You made my whole year with it. I'm not on DUP as
much as I'd like so I'm sorry it took me so long to reply.
The lotus plant has so history to it. I wanted to write
about it in this time and how it can still be inspiring,
no matter where you come from.
thanks for checking this out and the RL!
My son went to hear Glare live and came home
and played me a clip he recorded. He came
in around 11 o'clock at night. I stayed up until
1:30 a.m. and finished this write.
Re: Re. Not like the Roses
16th Sep 2024 1:20pm
Aww, your whole year? I am so very flattered.
And don't worry about being late, it was just a few days - I'm not on DUP as much as I'd like too and I take breaks at times. The lotus is very special plant indeed and it fitted your poem perfectly.
And don't worry about being late, it was just a few days - I'm not on DUP as much as I'd like too and I take breaks at times. The lotus is very special plant indeed and it fitted your poem perfectly.
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Re. Not like the Roses
Anonymous
18th Sep 2024 2:38am
"No need for switchblade stems
No one needs to suffer"
This line hits so hard. Can be felt in a delightful suffering way. Really like the style of this poem. Easy to visualize and understand yet poetic, beautiful and full of hope imo.
No one needs to suffer"
This line hits so hard. Can be felt in a delightful suffering way. Really like the style of this poem. Easy to visualize and understand yet poetic, beautiful and full of hope imo.

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Re: Re. Not like the Roses
18th Sep 2024 2:42am
Hi Alexanjah,
Aww, thanks for that. I don't like complicated poetry.
I try to keep it simple and easy to read.
Gotta strive for awesome metaphors:)
It's part of the fun/curse. LOL
Thanks for stopping by - it's appreciated!
Aww, thanks for that. I don't like complicated poetry.
I try to keep it simple and easy to read.
Gotta strive for awesome metaphors:)
It's part of the fun/curse. LOL
Thanks for stopping by - it's appreciated!
Re. Not like the Roses
21st Sep 2024 11:26pm
This is amazing. Showing how you do not need to be this perfect rose for him to see you. The fact you tell him you do not need to change because your not ashamed of who you are or where you're from. Then to be a Lotus. Just beautiful.;))
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Re: Re. Not like the Roses
21st Sep 2024 11:35pm
Hi Fai:)
Nope, I'm not like the roses. haha
But when that special someone still goes out of their way to
get to know you, make you feel special, and you know he's speaking from his heart - that feels amazing:)
You said exactly what I was trying to capture.
Thank you so much for checking this out:)
Nope, I'm not like the roses. haha
But when that special someone still goes out of their way to
get to know you, make you feel special, and you know he's speaking from his heart - that feels amazing:)
You said exactly what I was trying to capture.
Thank you so much for checking this out:)
Re. Not like the Roses
31st Oct 2024 10:56pm
'letting go of traumatic memories
while my mind unfolded
like enchanted origami
floating above water "
This is an incredible analogy, powerful in addressing trauma and yet prudent in the way you ended this stanza.
Amazing work
while my mind unfolded
like enchanted origami
floating above water "
This is an incredible analogy, powerful in addressing trauma and yet prudent in the way you ended this stanza.
Amazing work
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Re: Re. Not like the Roses
4th Nov 2024 1:09am
The lotus has special mojo! I really believe that. And how they float above water, above all that muck, and still unfold beauty is inspiring to me:) It teaches us to perseverance. About how to overcome unpleasant surroundings and how to keep your eye on the prize.
Staying focused is difficult enough under normal conditions.
thanks for checking out my work:)
Staying focused is difficult enough under normal conditions.
thanks for checking out my work:)